Author: titer1

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Post time 2012-10-20 14:02:40 |Display all floors
river16 Post time: 2012-10-20 02:41
just some complement. hope it helps:

if you mean all through your 4 years in uni you got scholarshi ...

impressive instructions!
I will be more confidence!
thanks for your help!
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Post time 2012-10-20 14:03:32 |Display all floors
river16 Post time: 2012-10-20 02:41
just some complement. hope it helps:

if you mean all through your 4 years in uni you got scholarshi ...

impressive instructions!
I will be more confident!
thanks for your help!
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Post time 2012-10-21 09:31:30 |Display all floors
seneca Post time: 2012-10-20 14:47
My humble opinion:

You talk too much about irrelevant personal aspects: your nickname, when you bec ...

thank u for your sincerely instruction
When I edit this post , I ignore the space and comma , I am very sorry!
I will try my best to edit it
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Post time 2012-10-22 09:48:36 |Display all floors
seneca Post time: 2012-10-21 12:28
Let me correct this one post of yours, so you will see there is a hell of a lot to improve:

Thank you for your detailed instruction!
I posted the second version of my introduction!
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Post time 2012-10-22 09:49:11 |Display all floors
This post was edited by titer1 at 2012-10-22 09:55

Hi, everybody. I am honored to have the chance to introduce myself
       I am vanny , and you can call me Chinese name **, that sounds the lucky number 66. I am sensitive about the numbers, I like my major of Computer technology.
        In my undergraduate ‘s life, I got the consecutive scholarship after 4 years' study, all the scholarship can afford 75% of my tuition,actually, only  top 10% of students can do it ,for it, I got the qualification of being admitted to the postgraduate program without examination.
        Besides study in my bachelor’s life, I took part in the school union for 2 years, and I was the union Promotion Director, who is responsible to create and spread posters and news. I was so happy when I saw the works were showed in front of our classmates. This is the power of teamwork,
       More great power of teamwork  was unleashed in my graduate’s work, I took part in 3 different projects, Fortunately, I was the main developer all the time. And also I was the leader of one project. All the project was completed well. My skill to program and cooperate with members was improved a lt. However, I am still on the way to improve myself.
        Now ,** company is on my favorite companies’ list,
I was confident that I can meet all your requirements and be competent for this position ,so I am looking forward to being part of your big family.
        That 's all, thank you!

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Post time 2012-10-22 10:43:49 |Display all floors
seneca Post time: 2012-10-22 10:30
Once more I urge you to be more to the point. Write your full name, and no such twaddle as "you can  ...

it is time to wait the 3rd version !
I will try to do it better
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