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我在网上遇到这个有关中学生作英语作文的网站,一看就头顶雾烟。

lt'sgetting warmer and warmer.Everything is dry, trees, fields and even the air. Just then, it rains. lt's as soft as silk. ltwashes the dirty of the earth and waters the plants and the fields. lt also waters people's hears. Farmers stand in the spring rain and smile.Spring rain is as dear as oil They seem to see the harvest time inautumn. Spring rain brings water to the air. It also brings hope topeople.

  春雨
春天到了,天气越来越暖和,万物都很干燥,树呀、田呀,甚至空气都是如此。就在这时,下雨了。它如丝般柔软,它洗掉了地上的尘土,浇灌了植物和 农田,它浇灌了人们的心。农民们站在春雨中微笑,春雨贵如油,他们仿佛看到了秋天的丰收时节。春雨为空气带来了水分,为人们带来了希望。

CoachMartin的评论:-
第一句: spring comes.
1)        句子第一个字首个字母没有用大写。  Spring …
2)        Comes 时态用错了。
Spring comes in February every year. 年年铁定重覆的。
a) Spring has come.
b) Spring has arrived.
c) Spring is with us now.
d) It’s spring time now.
以上举了几个可取的表达方法。
第二句: It’s getting warmer and warmer.  这句没问题。
第三句: Everything is dry, trees, fields and even the air.
1)        应该写成 Everything is dry – trees, fields and even the air.
Just then, it trains.
1)        时态大错特错。
过去的事,怎能用现在式呢?
2)        可写成如下例子:-
a) It just rained.
b) Just now, it rained.
第四句:  lt's as soft as silk.
我这懒人没有看中文那段,做到这里时,觉得不通才找中文看。原来是从中文翻成英语。但翻的人基本上没有那条件去翻。
我现在转而把中文原文翻成英语,给大家分享。
这些不负责任的所谓教育工作者,是误人子弟。遇到不懂真相的,把英文本背读,你知後果如何了!

Spring is with us now.  The weather has become warmer and it dries up everything – trees, fields and even the air.  Then it starts raining.  Soft as silk, the rain washes away the sand and dust on earth, and waters the plants and farm land.  Farmers standing there are full of smiles.  Spring rain is as precious as oil.  We can almost see the harvest season in autumn.  Spring rain moistens the air to bring us hope.



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