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Post time 2011-1-11 16:19:16 |Display all floors
This Manual; in its entirety, outlines the expectations and requirements for our  supplier’s performance not only in relation to meeting specific fabric requirements  and  quality, but also to define the performance and resolution management that the CSC specified garment factories can expect from an approved Columbia Sportswear raw material supplier.
本手册,总体来讲,为供应商工作提供了我们的期望和要求的大致轮廓。不但要达到特定的面料的指定要求和质量,而且定义了执行和决议管理,哥仑比亚指定的成衣厂能期望从核准原料供应商。

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Post time 2011-1-12 09:23:42 |Display all floors

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说明总体指出我们对供应商期望和要求。这些期望和要求不仅仅是关于如何满足特殊面料要求和保证质量,并且还包括CSC指定成衣生产商对经认证的哥伦比亚体育服装原材料供应商在总体表现和具体管理方案的期望和要求。

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Post time 2011-1-12 22:33:40 |Display all floors
Also I think so, 上面的跟贴将“大致轮廓”去掉了。因为汉语习惯讲期望和要求,不说详细,就是普通的,大致的。
不过后面句式似乎嫌长。

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