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写了几句英语? 把它贴在这儿,我帮你看有没有错误。 [Copy link] 中文

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[ Last edited by calimero at 2010-4-21 11:49 PM ]
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Post time 2010-4-16 08:57:00 |Display all floors
Originally posted by calimero at 2010-4-15 22:04

really?Is it free?

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Post time 2010-4-16 15:16:49 |Display all floors
你写了:

really?Is it free?


句子的开头要用大写字母,句子之间要留间隔:
Really? Is it free?


是的,是免费的。 但是如果你的文件有几百个句子,我只会改一小部分。如果你的文件有许多问题,我只会改最严重的。

我为什么要这样做呢:我喜欢帮大家个小忙学会英文,然后这个方法(自己写东西然后让别人给你意见怎么做更好)是个很好的方法。在这儿开一个话题也让我自己多一些参观这个论坛,多一些读你们写的中文,多一些学中文。

[ Last edited by calimero at 2010-4-16 09:03 PM ]
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Post time 2010-5-5 18:02:05 |Display all floors
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Post time 2010-5-6 05:32:24 |Display all floors
Calimero
your chinese is so good as your english !
But after reading your sentences ,I found there till have some difference between chinese and english in structure of sentences !
I did not mean that is mistake ,just  different habit ,consisting of article !

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Post time 2010-5-6 19:12:33 |Display all floors
Diego, 谢谢你的恭维。我相信我写的越多,读的越多,我中文水平也会上升越来越高  :)

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Originally posted by diego001 at 2010-5-6 05:32
Calimero
your chinese is so good as your english !
But after reading your sentences ,I found there till have some difference between chinese and english in structure of sentences !
I did not mean that is mistake ,just  different habit ,consisting of article !


首先要把逗号和感叹号放在对的地方:

Calimero
your chinese is so good as your english!
But after reading your sentences, I found there till have some difference between chinese and english in structure of sentences!
I did not mean that is mistake, just  different habit, consisting of article!


然后“普通话”和“英语”的开头要用大写字母:

Calimero
your Chinese is so good as your English!
But after reading your sentences, I found there till have some difference between Chinese and English in structure of sentences!
I did not mean that is mistake, just  different habit, consisting of article!


这个有两个写法,在电子邮件一般用第一个,在论坛里面第二个用的多一些:

Hi Calimero,

Your Chinese ...


Calimero, your Chinese ...


前面几个比较容易改,现在我们到了难一些的。

你英语水平已经不低了,我全部看懂了。但是如果你想写的更好,可以看下面的意见。

这句可以这样改:

Calimero, your Chinese is as good as your English!


意思就是:“你中文水平和你英语水平一样高!”  

如果想写:”你中文水平真高, 跟你英语水平一样的!” 可以这样写:“Your Chinese is very good, it's as good as your English!”

要看一下什么时候用“have”什么时候用“are“, 然后“some”是复数,所以也要写difference的复数:

But after reading your sentences, I found there still are some differences ...


常常名字之前要写个"a / an / the / your / my / his / her / that / this " 等等。

在这里要写:

between your Chinese and your English in the / your structure of the / yoursentences!


如果你要的话我帮你改你最后的句子。现在我就不看了。

结果:


Calimero, your Chinese is as good as your English!
But after reading your sentences, I found there still are some differences between your Chinese and your English in the structure of yoursentences!


你看,我改的并不多,就没有错误了。



[ Last edited by calimero at 2010-5-6 07:28 PM ]
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Post time 2010-5-10 01:01:34 |Display all floors
You are soooooooo nice!!!!
May I have know MSN or QQ?

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