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1-3 犹大从他玛氏生法勒斯和谢拉 ……(从字用得不当,1-5,1-6 同此。)
    …And Judas begat Pharas and Zara of Thamar… (犹大使他玛氏生了……)
    …And the sons of Judas were …by Thamar…   (犹大的儿子是……,乃……所生。)
1-20 ……有主的使者向他梦中显现……
   …an angel of the Lord appeared unto(or came to) him in a dream…(他梦见一位主的使者出现他的面前)
1-23 ……人要称他的名为……
    …they shall call his name (or gave the name) Emmanuel…(人们将称呼他…)
2-16 ……并四境所有的男孩……(应为:及其周围各地……)
     … in all the coasts… /  … in all the parts round about it …
3-8        …你们要结出果子来,与悔改的心相称。
Bring forth therefore fruits meet for repentance . (你们要拿出成果以示悔改。)
Let your change of heart be seen in your works.(让你们悔改之心见诸于行动。)
4-16 ……有光发现照着他们……
     and to them … light is sprun up. ([发现]有光升起照着他们)
     and to them did the dawn come up.( 朝霞对着他们而升起 )
5-1 ……就上了山,既已坐下……(此处既字用得不当)
    and when he was sat / seated…(……坐下来以后……)
5-5 ……必承受地土……(?!)
   …shall / will be comforted. (必将舒适)
5-13……以后无用,不过丢在外面……(不过一词用得不当)
    …nothing but to be cast / put out…(除了扔出去… 别无用处 >无用,只好/有扔出去……)
5-18 律法的的一点一画也不能废去,都要成全。(一点一画只能指字而言)
    …one jot or one little shall in no wise past from the law till all be fulfilled.(律法所记载的一点都不能废弃, / 哪怕废弃一点都是不明智的, / 只能全部履行。)
    … not the smallest letter or part of a letter will any way be taken from the law till all things be done. (律法中的文字,即便是最小部分, / 哪怕是最小的字母,/ 无论如何也不要删除,一切都要遵行。)
5-23 ……弟兄向你怀怨……(向应改为对,英文是against)
5-42  你们听见有说话,当爱你们的邻舍……
     Ye have heard that it hath said …(你们听说过,常言道……
     You have knowledge that it was said, Have love for your neighbor …(你们都了解,常言道…)
5-46 ……就是税吏不也是这样行吗?(比较,这样行吗?这样行的吗?)
     …do not even the publicans / tax-farmers / the same? (税吏之所为不也如此吗?)
5-47 你们……比人有什么长处呢?(按此理解,“你们”非人也。)
     …what do you more than others? (……你们做的比其他人多吗?)
5-48 所以,你们要完全。(单用“完全”,意犹未尽。)
     Be yet therefore perfect…/ Be then complete in righteousness…(所以,要完美无暇。)

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