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Post time 2009-3-31 11:05:47 |Display all floors
我更愿意在QC部门为公司尽微薄之力.

I prefer to make a little contribution to company at QC Development.

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Post time 2009-4-1 05:43:35 |Display all floors
Originally posted by larryjiaobin at 2009-3-31 11:05
我更愿意在QC部门为公司尽微薄之力.

I prefer to make a little contribution to company at QC Development.


1. why not just use would like to instead of prefer. Presumably, there is a comparison for prefer. But here it is not that clear.
2. contribution is a countable noun.
3. what company, according to your content, it should refer to some specific one.

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Post time 2009-4-1 13:53:44 |Display all floors
Dear Heidelberger,
Thanks so much for your answer. As you comments, Can I amend as below.

I'd like to make a few contributions to the company at QC department.

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Post time 2009-4-1 15:00:49 |Display all floors
1.a little contribution ----is OK

2."尽微薄之力" 是国人的谦逊说法。 对老外这样说反而不好,个人觉得如用英文表达应该是“竭尽全力”“尽最大努力”......

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Post time 2009-4-1 16:59:56 |Display all floors
Thanks Marchsnow.

As so, I need to say like this:   
I'd like to try my best to achieve the goal at Q.C department in the company.
Or I'd like to make a little contribution to the company at QC department.

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