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论文摘要翻译,请高手指正 [Copy link] 中文

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摘要:本文对上市公司财务预警研究进行了综述,通过上市公司财务预警问题研究现状、方法及模型的评析,并针对我国上市公司财务预警的启示提出了相关建议,目的是在公司危机发生之前向公司管理层发出财务预警信号,为上市公司防范财务风险,加强内部控制提供参考依据。
关键词:上市公司 财务预警 方法 模型
Abstract: This thesis gives a summary on the research of the financial risks forewarning system for listed companies. By reviewing and analyzing the actualities, methods and models of the research, and by offering pertinent suggestions on the financial risks pre-warning system for listed companies in China, it aims to send financial pre-warning signals to the management team before any financial risks appears, to prevent listed companies from financial risks and to provide reference for internal financial controls.
Key Word: listed companies, financial pre-warning, method, model

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Post time 2008-6-20 09:23:06 |Display all floors

一点建议,仅供参考

建议在翻译之前,先把原文的意思真正搞明白。

第二句,“提出相关建议”不是手段,而是“本文”的主要结论。这篇文章就是通过综述、分析,然后提出建议。因此它不应该放到By 的后面。建议改为:
By reviewing and analyzing the actualities, methods and models, it offers pertinent suggestions on the financial risks pre-warning system for listed companies in China.

下面是说这一研究的目的,建议另用一句,改为:
The aim of the research is  to send financial pre-warning signals to management team before any financial risks appear,  and provide references for listed companies to prevent financial risks and to enhance internal financial controls.

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Post time 2008-6-20 10:33:00 |Display all floors
我觉得原文第二句的表述不够清楚,所以自己翻的时候也觉得别扭。
谢谢楼上的建议!

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