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请教达人,翻译一个句子!请进 [Copy link] 中文

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Post time 2008-5-8 13:08:51 |Display all floors
第二个句子呢?没人告诉我吗?
ONE TEAM, ONE DREAM, XXX INTERNATIONAL BUSSINESS DEPARTMENT 2008 QINGYUAN QINGLONG RAVIN 2 DAYS HAPPY JOURNEY

这样可以吗?

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Post time 2008-5-9 14:37:21 |Display all floors
1.congratulations的问题,可以改为celebration (warm就免了)
2. dream 有点夸大,改为 goal 比较合适。2 day trip, day 不能用复数(因为2-day构成一个形容词)。快乐行的“快乐”就免了,别happy了,旅游哪有不happy的?还有要注意,结构灵活、松散是中文的特色,你这么照着字面去翻译成英文,就缺乏逻辑性了。
If winter comes, can spring be frozen ahead?

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Post time 2008-5-9 14:51:15 |Display all floors

try this

热烈庆祝XXX公司国际业务部月销售额突破1000万

celebrations for the record breaking 10million created by 国际业务部 of the XXX公司

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Medal of honor

Post time 2008-5-9 20:34:44 |Display all floors

同一个团队,同一个梦想

Originally posted by househusband at 2008-5-9 02:37 AM

2. dream 有点夸大,改为 goal 比较合适。

明显是东施效颦学奥运。

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