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Post time 2008-4-2 01:50:21 |Display all floors
似乎中文翻译的不地道!好像One Life can make a difference.一个生命创造一片生机。
我觉得用,未必要将one 翻译成一或唯一。如:生命激起涟漪 One heart can know what is true 心透视着真相。
不知道好不好,互相学习,不过这首诗确实唯美!

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Post time 2008-4-2 22:25:19 |Display all floors
Originally posted by yuri_l at 2008-4-2 01:50
似乎中文翻译的不地道!好像One Life can make a difference.一个生命创造一片生机。
我觉得用,未必要将one 翻译成一或唯一。如:生命激起涟漪 One heart can know what is true 心透视着真相。
不知道好不好, ...


谢谢你的建议
为了把“一”字突出
所以句句以“一”开始
心透视着真相
我认为透视使用不恰当

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Post time 2008-4-3 10:00:36 |Display all floors
Originally posted by rovi297 at 2008-4-1 07:01
一朵花,唤醒一场睡梦 ----->唤醒 一帘幽梦


你好
一帘幽梦 确实很美的措辞
我打算修改译本
但再想想
文章的措辞都是很平凡的,没有太多的个人感情色彩
一帘幽梦 是琼瑶的小说名字
如果这么译
会让人产生与爱情有关的联想
但 one flower can wake a dream
这里的dream没有其他修饰语
所以,我们也不用深挖其义或略带个人的理解
无论是幽梦还是美梦还是春梦……
你觉得呢:)
谢谢你的建议

[ Last edited by heroodle at 2008-4-3 10:01 AM ]

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Post time 2008-4-3 14:37:54 |Display all floors
Power of One

呵呵,老子说:道生一,一生二,二生三,三生万物。这首歌大概也是这么意思了。不知译成:无穷生机在于“一”,好不好?呵呵。

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Post time 2008-4-4 10:21:00 |Display all floors
Originally posted by studentyoung at 2008-4-3 14:37

呵呵,老子说:道生一,一生二,二生三,三生万物。这首歌大概也是这么意思了。不知译成:无穷生机在于“一”,好不好?呵呵。

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无穷始于“一”
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Post time 2008-4-14 09:47:29 |Display all floors
Power of One

One song can spark a moment
One flower can wake the dream
One tree can start a forest
One bird can herald spring

One smile begins a friendship      
One handclasp lifts a soul
One star can guide a ship at sea
One word can frame the goal

One vote can change a nation
One sunbeam lights a room
One candle wipes out darkness
One laugh will conquer gloom

One step must start each journey
One word must start a prayer
One hope will raise our spirits
One touch can show you care
One voice can speak with wisdom
One heart can know what is true
One Life can make a difference.

最美唯“一”

一支歌能点燃一个瞬间

一朵花能唤醒一场睡梦

一棵树能长成一片森林

一只鸟能传达一缕春意


一个微笑开启崭新友谊

一次握手升华彼此心灵

一颗星为航船指引前程

一个字勾划出人生抱负


一次表决改变一个民族

一束阳光照亮一间房屋

一支蜡烛驱散一抹黑暗

一阵笑声打破一片沉寂


一个迈步开始一段旅途

一句话倾诉内心的祝福

一线希望让人精神焕发

一个轻抚渗透无尽关爱

一个声音流露无穷智慧

一颗心灵辨别真假是非

一个生命创造一片生机

(最美唯“一”)

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Post time 2008-4-14 12:31:52 |Display all floors

最美的唯一

Originally posted by heroodle at 2008-3-23 15:55

Power of One

One song can spark a moment
One flower can wake the dream
One tree can start a forest
One bird can herald spring

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