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Power of One

One song can spark a moment
One flower can wake the dream
One tree can start a forest
One bird can herald spring

One smile begins a friendship      
One handclasp lifts a soul
One star can guide a ship at sea
One word can frame the goal

One vote can change a nation
One sunbeam lights a room
One candle wipes out darkness
One laugh will conquer gloom

One step must start each journey
One word must start a prayer
One hope will raise our spirits
One touch can show you care
One voice can speak with wisdom
One heart can know what is true
One Life can make a difference.

最美唯“一”

一支歌能点燃一个瞬间

一朵花能唤醒一场睡梦

一棵树能长成一片森林

一只鸟能传达一缕春意


一个微笑开启崭新友谊

一次握手升华彼此心灵

一颗星为航船指引前程

一个字勾划出人生轨迹


一次表决改变一个民族

一束阳光照亮一间房屋

一支蜡烛驱散一抹黑暗

一阵笑声打破一片沉寂


一个迈步开始一段旅途

一句话倾诉内心的祝福

一线希望使人精神振奋

一个轻抚渗透无尽关爱

一个声音流露无穷智慧

一颗心灵辨别真假是非

一个生命焕发一片生机

(最美唯“一”)



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bump it up

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once again

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英文title挺好的

但这个中文标题不易看懂

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Post time 2008-3-27 19:47:55 |Display all floors
Originally posted by yry111 at 2008-3-27 13:36
但这个中文标题不易看懂



谢谢你的回复
这是《疯狂英语》上面的一首英语散文诗
题目是借鉴于原文
但原文没有把诗译成汉语

power of one
最美唯“一”

看看各位大侠是否有更恰当的译本

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一的力量

直译就不错。朴实无华的翻译最好。

和“美”无关!何来“最”、“唯”?

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Post time 2008-3-28 13:05:49 |Display all floors
Thank you for sharing:
Here's my qick try:

Power of One

One song can spark a moment
那一刻被歌声点燃
One flower can wake the dream
那个梦被花朵唤醒
One tree can start a forest
一棵树能产生一片森林
One bird can herald spring
一只鸟能迎来春天

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