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Post time 2008-1-25 13:35:57 |Display all floors
You really need to be creative in handling stuff like this.  Forget the lousy impression the Chinese words most likely leave on you but remember what they're meant to say, and, every importantly, beautify your translation with your skills and imagination.

Example:
把你的爱放在我的心中取暖
The distance between  is skin thick.

I don't think I should go on with the rest.

[ Last edited by househusband at 2008-1-25 02:33 PM ]
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Post time 2008-1-25 13:49:43 |Display all floors

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I don't mean to offend you. I don't see any links between your hype and jewerly.

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Post time 2008-1-25 13:54:30 |Display all floors
Originally posted by rainbow at 2008-1-25 11:28


Let me create a line for your diamond.

A kiss is just a kiss, a diamond is still a diamond, as time goes by.


A kiss is still a kiss...  That makes a world of difference, doesn't it?
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Post time 2008-1-25 13:59:52 |Display all floors
Originally posted by househusband at 2008-1-25 13:54

A kiss is still a kiss...  That makes a world of difference, doesn't it?


Love is not eternal but diamond

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Post time 2008-1-25 14:03:01 |Display all floors
Originally posted by rainbow at 2008-1-25 13:59


Love is not eternal but diamond


I know. But your task is one of salesmanship, so pretend it is.
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Post time 2008-1-25 14:04:16 |Display all floors
Originally posted by househusband at 2008-1-25 14:03


I know. But your task is one of salesmanship, so pretend it is.


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Post time 2008-1-25 14:26:41 |Display all floors
把你的爱放在我的心中取暖
我对你的爱就像汪洋大海
The distance between  is skin thick.
The love within is ocean deep.


让时光与岁月赶走匆匆的脚步
让爱的思绪与歌声在清晨芳菲
Let  love age with shine, not with time.
Let love ring every morning, rain or shine.

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你看, 又“枪毙了”两双。



PS: Correction: deep--> thick

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