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Post time 2007-5-22 20:06:51 |Display all floors
1.The computer has been vastly used in various sections of the society.

2. Computer is a general service word in our lives.

3. Computer is convenient for people’s lives.

请帮忙看看上面的句子有无问题~
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Post time 2007-5-24 23:47:43 |Display all floors
?有人帮忙看看吗?

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Post time 2007-5-29 17:22:57 |Display all floors
Originally posted by lroger at 2007-5-22 20:06
1.The computer has been vastly used in various sections of the society.

2. Computer is a general service word in our lives.

3. Computer is convenient for people’s lives.

请帮忙看看上面的 ...


1. I guess it is ok, but I prefer this version:

     The computer is widely used in various sections of the society.

    "has been" somehow suggests to me that the computer is no longer being used in that way.

2. computer = word? Clear as mud to me, I guess.

my guess: The computer is a common device in our lives.

3.  The computer is a convenience for people's life.

Or maybe: The computer is a convenience in people's livelihood.

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