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some of my poetry.. [Copy link] 中文

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Post time 2007-3-22 01:38:48 |Display all floors
the night set in with all it's weary overtones..
and jufang is buried under the stars forever..
from ju fang to bu ming where is she now?
who will find her heart burning through the earth?

her secret lays buried with her, only in harmony with the Dao..
whoever can possess the jade and it does not weigh heavy..
can wake her from her slumber and grant her back her name
Jia Wu! ..even Heaven is weeping are you not purturbed?

my aching heart is stripped bear..where else is there to hide?
where can i lose my name and never be seen at noon tide?
the screaching pain..the heavy rancour and even those clouds of steel..
bring me no closer to such comfort, no place i can call my own...

ill fated aloneness is etching itself on my porous skin..
the rain only seeping through flirting on a glass window..
Where is the bountiful face of the one i so much loved?
my eyes once feasted on his warmth no telling where he waits...


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Post time 2007-3-22 15:18:39 |Display all floors


Do you have the Chinese for your poetry?

If this is originally written in English, perhaps it is not standard English, and refers to things which are Chinese and not much used in English Poetry.  

Please tell us the story behind these verses, and perhaps we can appreciate them a little more.
LSR.  龙诗人  or  龍詩人
A crater on the planet Mercury is named 李白. (Li Bai)

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Post time 2007-3-29 16:22:25 |Display all floors
what is a "weary overtone" ?

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