Author: waibeijing

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Post time 2007-1-27 12:56:56 |Display all floors

Thanks a lot

Nyleda,
Thanks a lot for you suggestions, they are very useful. Your sentences are so compact and read very well. I will keep these structures in mind. Your explanations are very very clear, very logical, thanks a lot..
thanks to rovi too, you are absolutely right, in the long run, the only way to improve is to read more original material written in Chinese.
WB

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Post time 2007-1-27 23:05:41 |Display all floors

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The world has changed radically since the UN took shape at the end of the
World War II, almost sixty years ago. It is these changes that UN Secretary-General
Kofi Annan now wants to give more recognition to through his proposals for
the most wide-ranging reforms of the UN since 1945.
联合国成立于二战结束时期,六十年来,这世界发生了翻天覆地的变化,联合国秘书长安南意识到今非昔比,该大刀阔斧的进行一番改革了,他提出了一兰子计划,这是联合国1945年成立以来最彻底的一次改革
In reality, he came up with a recipe for a new world, where human rights,
the battle against hunger and poverty and arms control will have a much
more prominent place in the UN. A lot of work and detailed analysis are
behind the proposals. Like all wise policies, they took into account today's
realities. And they seek a balance between the benefits such reforms would
have for various groups of countries: in industrialized countries hit by
terrorism and in developing countries  that are still fighting basic poverty.
人权至上,抗饥扶贫,武器控制将是联合国工作的重点,每一项计划提纲都配备了细致入微的分析和大量的工作部署,他的确开了良方妙药来治理这个(千疮百孔的)世界,真是英明的政策,种种提议都很切(务)实,一一对证下药,由于改革给不同世界的国家(遭受恐怖袭击的工业国与仍然奋力脱贫的发展中国家)带来的收获将有厚有薄,这些政策力求(多方位)权衡,争取"一碗水端平"

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