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Post time 2007-1-30 14:13:58 |Display all floors
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Post time 2007-1-30 21:51:10 |Display all floors

Sweetish music is perfect (What I have met till now)

Recently, me, by chance , came across the perfect light music from Bandary (Sweetish )

You have to savor them when you are low in mind

You can also treat them as your background music

Sure, your life will be more interesting and meaningful

Inspired by the perfect music, you are driven to write something

Which will be somewhat poem

Do not forget to share your works with us here

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Post time 2007-2-1 05:05:09 |Display all floors

Here is an acient Chinese Ballad

Rippling clear, rippling bright

The rippling river is a lovely sight

As boats that have tow oars are admired

So girls that have tow lovers are admired


But the original Chinese version is much much better

Any foreign friends can share your idea or the impression when you read this?


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Post time 2007-2-2 14:47:36 |Display all floors
Sentinel:

Alone she sits with head in hands
Alone with all her worldly plans
Alone in a crowd she hides her tears
Alone she will die her greatest of fears
Alone at her work no friends at her side
Alone with her thoughts her feelings she hides
Alone for all time as time marches on
Alone she will sing her loneliest song
Alone does she sit afraid to be heard
Alone will she live without even a word
Alone she will die and no one will know
Alone was her choice her esteem it was low
Alone she keeps watch always on guard
Alone without love her life is so hard
Alone now as she takes her last breath
Alone as she wished Alone in her death
There are no Ugly women , only those with low self esteem .

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Post time 2007-2-2 22:08:54 |Display all floors

Along Aong Along

It is an interesting poem in terms of the form

Along along along

However, when i finished savoring this ALONG

It is not interesting at all but recalled me some other things in this society

SHE may be a perfectionist , eagering for a perfect career? a perfect  article? a perfect lover? ...

In this colorful world, SHE is doomed to death with nothing left in this world though SHE tried

As a poet, SHE can express HER feelings/emotions from the deep bottom of heart

For this or that reason,  they are , unfortunately, readable.

Then SHE alone , with her body and feelings

THE MOONSHINE CAN NOT EXPECT ALL REFLECTIONS FROM THE EARTH.

Derektian






Originally posted by cyberspook at 2007-2-2 09:47
Sentinel:

Alone she sits with head in hands
Alone with all her worldly plans
Alone in a crowd she hides her tears
Alone she will die her greatest of fears
Alone at her work no friends at he ...
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Post time 2007-2-2 22:48:26 |Display all floors

Here is a photo serves your VERSE as a caption

Originally posted by seclusive at 2007-2-2 14:20
Here is a verse I composed when walking home this evening.

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Hi,

Totally, I am impressed by your  your pure and vivid VERSE (as you said)

Exactly , it should be a scrap , which has been stored in the place for a long time

It can not be jotted down on paper (now, maybe it is a keyboard)Just because of  absence of right lighter

It seems your warm HOME is the lighter or who knows... though i am trying to interpret it  

Thanks for your kindness and participatory VERSE

Beautiful scenery is always seize by those well-prepared and circumspective.
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Post time 2007-2-3 16:10:26 |Display all floors
The Vein Express

The vein express is calling it will take you for a ride
You feel your skin is crawling like maggots have got inside
Another fix another hit is all that you will need
Your in control you have it licked yet still your veins they bleed

You beg you steal you lie and cheat just to feed your veins
That monkeys on your back again he’s pulling at your reigns
Nothing matters no one else the hunger fills your mind
It grips you tight it squeezes hard it understands your kind

Reality’s your weakness you gutless piece of ----
It’s easier to run and hide than take control of it
You see the path your walking and with every step you take
You alienate your loved ones and show them only hate

Your family has tried to help you and how do you repay
You steal from them to get your fix and lie to them each day
Their love for you is failing your mothers heart it breaks
They think that they have failed you they don’t have what it takes

You sit alone your demons come that monkey cracks his whip
Your now a mindless zombie the drugs have seen to it
Another hit another fix your mind it starts to swim
But you feel that this ones different you shiver from within

Your breathing now is painful the light it starts to fade
Your life it seeps into the sheets of the bed that you have made
The stench of your existence it permeates the air
Lividity it stains you and rigor sets your stare

The ones that you have left behind now carry all your pain
Your family now it breaks apart as fingers point the blame
All of this has come to pass from one night at a rave
Where you had tried your very first drug forever you will crave
There are no Ugly women , only those with low self esteem .

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