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Post time 2006-11-29 00:34:21 |Display all floors
What kind of a professor do you have?

an increase in immigrants from Asia? It should either say: an increase in the number of immigrants from Asia, or, an increase in immigration from Asia.

Also, I would suggest changing cannot change to won't change.

Originally posted by waibeijing at 2006-11-28 23:46
this is what my Professor finally okayed:

"As I see it (or it seems to me), the 'Westernness' of this society cannot change merely because  of an increase in immigrants from Asia."


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Post time 2006-11-29 12:01:19 |Display all floors

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