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Post time 2006-10-5 21:43:19 |Display all floors
心痛的感觉
    街头一家新潮茶馆推出一种饮料,名叫“心痛的感觉”。某君想来想去也弄不明白它的含义,便怀着好奇心递上50元。要了一杯试试。果然有了“心痛的感觉”——原来是一杯白开水。
希望大家拿出自己的译文,我们共同学习!

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Post time 2006-10-5 22:13:12 |Display all floors
街头一家新潮茶馆推出一种饮料,名叫“心痛的感觉”。某君想来想去也弄不明白它的含义,便怀着好奇心递上50元。要了一杯试试。果然有了“心痛的感觉”——原来是一杯白开水。
at the end of the street is  a tea shop, distinctly sticking out and facifully touting a new beverage named "Heart-aching Feeling". Mr. So-and-So is puzzling over it and decided to give it a go himself. He comes to the tea shop with great curiosity and orders a tea by being charged 50 yuan. As it is, he really has the very feeling of a heartache-- he is offered nothing but a glass of plain boiled water.

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Post time 2006-10-6 15:58:47 |Display all floors
向大家学习了很多!暂时,我先删去我的译文。等再推敲,推敲之后,再贴出自己的成熟作品。:P:P

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Post time 2006-10-6 18:48:06 |Display all floors
Originally posted by english2008 at 2006-10-6 15:58
Heartache
    A new-wave teahouse recently promoted a beverage called Heartache. One gentleman racked his brains and could nod figure out its implication. So, to satisfy his curiosity, he bought o ...



把某君译为gentleman好象不太恰当?

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Post time 2006-10-6 18:50:18 |Display all floors
Originally posted by english2008 at 2006-10-6 15:58
Heartache
    A new-wave teahouse recently promoted a beverage called Heartache. One gentleman racked his brains and could nod figure out its implication. So, to satisfy his curiosity, he bought o ...


not , typo

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Post time 2006-10-6 18:54:07 |Display all floors
it made him experience a new sensation—heartache



experience + a new sensation 好象不太恰当, 而且您怎么知道这对于某君是一种新的体验? 说不定某君天天被宰

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Post time 2006-10-6 18:57:01 |Display all floors
50 yuan for a cup of cold boiled water!



50 放在句首,应避免阿拉伯数字,用大写。

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