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冰心散文对建立现代汉语的典范卓有贡献。她的语言在白话的基础上融入古文、方言、欧化的种种成分,不仅典雅凝练,而且灵活自然。从20世纪20年代起,她的散文作品就被学校竞相选入课本。
Bingxin’s proses made great contributions to establish a standard for modern Chinese language. Her language, having the elements of classical languages, dialects and western languages on the basis of colloquialism, is not only elegant and simple, but also elastic and natural. From 1920s on, her proses have been selected into testbooks by schools.

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Post time 2006-10-3 15:06:15 |Display all floors
contribution to 的to是介词,后面接名词

从20世纪20年代起 Her........, which began from 1920s


testbooks--> textbooks
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Suggestions: correct your misspellings, check the usage of puntuations, grammers, prepositions, then the wording.

"冰心散文对建立现代汉语的典范卓有贡献" 这句意思看不懂.

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Post time 2006-10-3 15:46:25 |Display all floors
Originally posted by sophia2123 at 2006-10-3 14:21
冰心散文对建立现代汉语的典范卓有贡献。她的语言在白话的基础上融入古文、方言、欧化的种种成分,不仅典雅凝练,而且灵活自然。从20世纪20年代起,她的散文作品就被学校竞相选入课本。
Bingxin’s proses made  ...

冰心散文对建立现代汉语的典范卓有贡献。她的语言在白话的基础上融入古文、方言、欧化的种种成分,不仅典雅凝练,而且灵活自然。从20世纪20年代起,她的散文作品就被学校竞相选入课本。
Modern Chinese language standard was established through the help of  Bingxin’s prose.  Her writing style encapsulating elements of classical writing, dialects and western languages, was not only elegant and concise, but also adaptable and natural.  From 1920s on, her prose had been used in textbooks by schools.

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Having been used in textbooks by schools since1920s, Bingxin's proses contributed to the formation of  modern Chinese language standard.  By adopting the elements from classical languages, dialects and western languages on the basis of colloquialism, she innovated an elegant ,concise writing style characterized by a flexible and natural language.

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