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Post time 2006-9-20 16:56:02 |Display all floors
成为名牌城市,蓬莱城市经济发展突破了的发展瓶颈,原来的环境、人文优势象突然发现的新大陆被投资者、商家所“发现”。蓬莱也因此迎来了一个井喷式的发展高峰。“和平圣城”国际上的知名度和美誉度大幅攀升。五年来,蓬莱合同和实际利用外资年均递增139%和87%,先后引进过千万美元项目60多个,过5亿元项目近30个。来蓬莱居住的外来人、游客数量和门票收入以年均35%、40%和40%速度递增。
Penglai ,being a famous brand city, has broken through the bottleneck of its urban economic development and the formerly deposited environment and humanistic advantages seemingly all of a sudden find “favor” with the investors and businessmen of foresight and vision as a “New Continent” Therefore Penglai ushers in another peak of the exponential growth in its economy. The global popularity and reputation of this “Holy City of Peace” have escalated on a large scale. In the past five years, the contracts and the actually utilized foreign capital obtained by Penglai maintain an average year-on-year growth rate of 139% and 87% and Penglai has introduced more than 60 investment projects with each exceeding 10 million US dollars and nearly 30 with each exceeding 500 million US dollars. And Penglai boats the average annual progressive increase of 35%, 40% and 40% in terms of the number of migrants, the number of tourists and the admission ticket income respectively.

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Post time 2006-9-20 17:16:20 |Display all floors

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Penglai ,as a famous brand city, has broken through the bottleneck of its urban economic development.  The formerly deposited environment and humanistic advantages seemed, all of a sudden, find “favor” with the investors and businessmen of foresight and vision as a “New Continent”.  Therefore Penglai ushers in another peak of the exponential growth in its economy. The global popularity and reputation of this “Holy City of Peace” have escalated drastically. In the past five years, the contracts and the actually utilized foreign capital obtained by Penglai maintained an average year-on-year growth rate of 139% and 87% respectively, and also it has introduced more than 60 investment projects with each exceeding 10 million US dollars and nearly 30 with each exceeding 500 million US dollars. And Penglai boats the average annual progressive increases of 35%, 40% and 40% in terms of the number of migrants, the number of tourists and the admission ticket income respectively.

不错,做了少量修改;-)

另一个问题是,觉得and用的太多了。

[ Last edited by hly2006 at 2006-9-20 05:22 PM ]

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Post time 2006-9-20 17:53:39 |Display all floors
谢谢hly2006,您总是这么及时给予帮助!

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Post time 2006-9-20 17:58:50 |Display all floors
不敢当,只是一些建议:——)

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