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robertren

please help me to correct those sentences below on syntax and words .

Q: t would you do for us? What can you do for us that someone else can't?

A: You see, during the most time of last two years I was working on development of hospital management software. I gained many skills and experiences. In addition, I’m working in a team with attestation of CMM-3, so I could be more professional on software developing than others.

thank you for  your help,especial elizer friend.

robertren

Question and Answer

please help me to correct those sentences below on syntax and words .

Q: what  would you do for us? What can you do for us that someone else can't?

A: You see, during the most time of last two years I was working on development of hospital management software. I gained many skills and experiences. In addition, I’m working in a team with attestation of CMM-3, so I could be more professional on software developing than others.

thank you for  your help,especial elizer friend.

robertren

You feel  those sentences are  right? please correct them. I will appreciate this.

robertren

Can anyone give me some advices?

elizer

Q: t would you do for us? What can you do for us that someone else can't?

Q: What would you like to do? What is your special strength?

icecreamlee

Is the first post the same as the second one? Only different on:
1) Q: t would you do for us?
2)Q: what  would you do for us?

elizer

A: You see, during last two years I was working on software development for hospital management. I gained many skills and experiences. In addition, I'm  in a team working with attestation of CMM-3, so I could be more professional than others on software development .