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Post time 2006-5-10 12:12:27 |Display all floors
能指出多少,算的多少:_)

答:我从小就有一个梦想,就是我将来一定要超越我的父母。我父亲毕业于中国著名的北京大学,如果我去美国留学就有更多的选择,也使得我有机会超越我的父母(哈哈!)。当然,我家庭的经济能力为我去SDSU学习提供了物质基础,我父母企业的发展,要求我学习掌握现代企业的经营管理知识,为将来发展壮大他们的企业创造条件。
I have a dream since my childhood, I want to surpass my parents. My father graduated from the prestigious university Beijing University, I’ll have more choices if I can go to study in Amercian, and also have an opportunity to supass my parents. Of course, the financial foundation of my family provides the foundation for my study in SDSU, the development of my family business needs me to master a knowledge of modern industry management, so to creates a chance to strengthen their enterprise.

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understanding+expressing+polishing

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Post time 2006-5-10 13:09:41 |Display all floors
Some random sentences to get you started:

I have a dream since my childhood, I want to surpass my parents.
I've dreamed of surpassing my parents since I was a child.

Because I’m still very young, I have not yet give a serious consideration of my future work.
I feel it is too early in my life to commit to a single career.

The English version of this letter needs a major rewrite.

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Post time 2006-5-10 15:34:56 |Display all floors
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Post time 2006-5-10 15:44:54 |Display all floors

i would say it sounds like somewhat chinese-english!

some thing is needed to do for your statement!

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Post time 2006-5-10 15:46:11 |Display all floors
的确是CHINGLISH,是我翻译的:-) 哈哈
理解=>表达=》润色
understanding+expressing+polishing

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Post time 2006-5-10 16:28:20 |Display all floors
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