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In 2003, the capital fund for the governmental sectors had reached 4413 billion yuan

前面有2003,后面用完成时态不太恰当.
4413 billion yuan =4.413trillion
理解=>表达=》润色
understanding+expressing+polishing

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可否说成:
..., 38.3 billion yuan more than the previous year

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