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Post time 2006-2-21 11:47:53 |Display all floors
Rarely has a technological development had a great impact on as many aspects of social ,economic,and cultural development as the growth of electronics

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Post time 2006-2-21 12:08:22 |Display all floors
Originally posted by luxgum at 2006-2-20 22:47
Rarely has a technological development had a great impact on as many aspects of social , economic, and cultural development as the growth of electronics


不通。我认为大问题出在 as many aspects of social , economic, and cultural development as the growth of electronics.

究竟是拿什么比什么呢?

单从语法考虑,至少得改作:
Rarely has a technological development had as great an impact on so many aspects of social, economic, and cultural development as the growth of electronics.

语法通得过了,却还嫌罗嗦,如 so many aspects of 其实反倒削弱了句子的力量。建议再裁为:

Rarely has a technology had as great an impact on social, economic, and cultural development as the growth of electronics.

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Post time 2006-2-21 12:26:24 |Display all floors

恩,这样一改,语句通顺多了

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Post time 2006-2-21 14:17:59 |Display all floors
可是意思完全变掉了呀,可不可以这样:
Rarely has a technological development had a great impact on as many aspects ie. social , economic, and cultural development , as the growth of electronics

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