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前言:
这是老板布置给我们的作业,我分到的是翻译摘要。这么多的内容,不晓得何年何月才可以完工。里面净是我不懂的东西,感觉让我翻译简直就是以其昏昏,使其昭昭。敬请各位高手提出修改意见,别让我老板骂我太凶就可以了,谢谢。下面是第一份作业,估计以后是连载了。。。。
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科学技术发展的伦理思考

摘要:科学技术的发展给人类的发展带来巨大进步,但也令人类的持续发展面临许多困境,如:科技的危险程度与其强大程度成正比,现代科技的发展带来新的富有挑战性的伦理问题,传统的伦理价值淡化甚至消失,人的异化不可避免,系统危险增加,等等。因此,必须全面理解科技与伦理的联系,科技与伦理相互渗透、和谐发展,推进人类全面、协调、可持续发展。科技工作者必须建立将科技造福于人类的伦理观,这是唯一正确的选择。

关键词:科学技术发展;伦理;可持续发展

  Ethics Reflections on the Development of Science and Technology

Abstract: The development of science and technology has brought great progress for humans, with many dilemmas for the sustainable development meanwhile. For instance, the hazards brought by science and technology are equally decisive to its formidability; new and challenging ethics matters appear , like the decaying or vanishing of the traditional ethics, unavoidability of humane alienation , growing hazardous ratio and so forth. Therefore, it is needy to fully comprehend the relationship of ethics and science and technology which are mutually seeping into each other. Both should have harmonious development in order to boost the overall and sustainable development of the humans. The scientific and technical workers must develop the ethics views of benefiting the whole humans and this is the solely wise choice.

Key words: development of science and technology, ethics , sustainable development.

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re: 科学技术发展的伦理思考 -----Ethics reflections on .....

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Post time 2005-9-25 12:58:43 |Display all floors

FYR - some suggestions

科学技术发展的伦理思考 Ethical considerations in the development of ...

The development of science and technology has brought great progress for humans, with many dilemmas for the sustainable development meanwhile.
> The development of science and technology has brought great progress for humans as well as many dilemmas for sustainable development.

the hazards brought by science and technology are equally decisive to its formidability
> the greater the achievement in ... the more risks/threats it brings

new and challenging ethics matters appear , like the
> new and more challenging ethical issues appear, such as...

系统危险systemic danger/risks???

必须全面理解科技与伦理的联系,科技与伦理相互渗透、和谐发展,推进人类全面、协调、可持续发展 - not good Chinese
理解科技与伦理的联系 is ok, but 理解 科技与伦理相互渗透、和谐发展 is incomplete.

seeping into each other --> cross pollination; affecting each other; blurring of the line;

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Post time 2005-9-25 13:49:54 |Display all floors

fyi

因此,必须全面理解科技与伦理的联系,科技与伦理相互渗透、和谐发展,推进人类全面、协调、可持续发展
according to laoxinaggg's suggestion.
因此,必须全面理解科技与伦理的联系,(使/让/以便于)科技与伦理相互渗透、和谐发展,推进人类全面、协调、可持续发展

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科学技术发展的伦理思考

i tried to revise the original chinese text. here is my new version. any comments and suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

摘要:科学技术的产生和发展极大的促进了人类文明的发展,同时向正在努力使其文明持续健康发展的人类本身提出了严肃的问题,如:科学技术的不慎使用给人类造成危害的程度与其强大的程度成正比,现代科技的发展正在带来富有挑战性的全新伦理问题,新颖科技观念冲击传统的伦理价值使之淡化甚至消失,其结果是人的异化成为不可避免,生物系统整体危险增加,诸如此类。因此,十分必要全面理解科技与伦理之间的(内在)联系及其在发展中彼此影响的关系,从而使人类文明能够全面、协调、可持续地发展。为此目的,我们必须强调“科技造福于人类”是科学技术工作者的唯一正确的伦理观。

i really don't like this superfluous writing style

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Post time 2005-9-25 14:05:23 |Display all floors

good work nyleda

BTW, I don't think we will ever 全面理解..., so suggest translating it to "a good understanding of..."

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