Author: littleboat

Part I. Our Company's Website, Pls help me ! [Copy link] 中文

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Post time 2005-2-1 15:05:19 |Display all floors

why not invigorate?

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Post time 2005-2-1 15:08:46 |Display all floors

often, neutral is natural

try to speak these words to a native and watch his face :)

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Post time 2005-2-1 15:45:22 |Display all floors

Develop does sound more natural here.

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Post time 2005-2-2 11:27:51 |Display all floors

some additional ones!

Our Strategy – (Invigorate) China’s Online Games Industry (T)hrough Continuous Innovation

(Since) its (inception), XXXX Games Development Co. Ltd. (has been a pioneer in) China’s internet games industry.  (By developing) games (with distinctive) national characteristics, and being practical and innovative, we (strive) to be a leader in China’s (online) games industry.

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Post time 2005-2-2 12:37:05 |Display all floors

let me get this straight, ur company's website sounds rubbish

ask your marketing manager, what is the function of a website? don't u want something practical that can better serve your customers ? Drop those grandeous words which mean nothing.  

Go to  look at other world famous game company's website and see how they do this job.

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Post time 2005-2-2 12:43:09 |Display all floors

Thue. It is full of cliche, and big and empty words.

That's what I had wanted to tell our General Manager, but on second thought, the person who wrote this rubbish is not a bad person, so don't want to create trouble for him.

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