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Post time 2005-1-19 10:25:37 |Display all floors
I have some english sencense which needs to translated into Chinese ? Could you help me with the translation?
You know my english is not good. But i have a try. Could you give me much better translation of these sencenses?

1 There is more than one path to the summit.
1. 成功的路不止一条.
2.通往成功颠峰的路不止一条.
2 Today is a day for doing your best .
今天是能够让你表现得最好的一天.
3 Be frank in examining and thinking; then take action.
真诚的自醒,然后采取行动.
4 Today more than yesterday; tomorrow above today.
1.今天比昨天重要,明天比今天重要.
2.今天的意义大于昨天,明天的意义大于今天.
5 The heat is your strongest ally.
热情是你最坚强的同盟伙伴.
6 The act of doing leads to accomplishment .
行动是通往成功之路的向导.
7 The culmination of effort becomes a chain of achievements.
最大的付出造就了一串成功的足迹.
8 Desire is the hand that moves fate.
渴望是把命运推向成功之手.
9 Youth means being young at heart.
年轻意味着永葆一颗青春之心.
10 First have the desire. And make it a strong one.
首先要有成功的渴望,然后再加强它.
11 As long as keep your ambition, you will not falter.
1.只要保持一颗向上的野心,你就不会蹒跚而行.
2只要保持一颗向上的野心,你将会勇往直前.

I fell shamed for my awarkard english translation.
Could you help me to correct my translation?

I would be appreciative for you kind attention.

JANET

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Post time 2005-1-19 11:11:36 |Display all floors

Reference below my version

Today is a day for doing your best .
今天是你表现得最好的一天.

Be frank in examining and thinking; then take action.
保持理性地思索和预测, 然后采取行动.

Today more than yesterday; tomorrow above today.
1.青出于蓝,而胜于蓝

The culmination of effort becomes a chain of achievements.
最大的付出将获得不断的成绩

8 Desire is the hand that moves fate.
渴望是改变命运之神.

10 First have the desire. And make it a strong one.
首先要有成功的渴望,然后把渴望变成强烈的愿望.

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Post time 2005-1-19 11:16:03 |Display all floors

I did it in a hurry, just for your refenence.

1All roads leads to Rome!
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2 Today is a day for doing your best . means 今天是你要尽力的一天
Today is the day for making the best of yourself. or today is the day for showing off yourself .


3. Take action over through eximination and pondering of oneself. ..
4 Today is more significant than yesterday , and tomorrow, today.
5 Enthusiasm is your strongest ally
6 Action is the guide to ensure success.

7 Greatest effort marks an array of  footprint to  success.

8 Desire is the hand  pushing  the  fate to the track  of success.


9 Youth means forever being young at heart. or,
Youth means  holding  a young heart forever.
10 First, develop  the desire for success, and then, enforce it.


11 As long as you keep a upward ambition, you will never falter.
1.只要保持一颗向上的野心,你就不会蹒跚而行.
2只要保持一颗向上的野心,你将会勇往直前.




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