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Post time 2004-12-20 11:56:51 |Display all floors
Forty-three staff from the Beijing office had a small Xmas party on 16 December night. The party was held in a French-style dinning bar in San Li Tun, the well known bar street in Beijing. It was a little bit snowy in the morning and made it more Christmassy.

12月16日晚上北京办公室举行了一个小型圣诞晚会,晚会有43名员工参加。晚会是在三里屯(北京著名酒吧街)的一个法式餐厅进行。早晨的微雪增添了圣诞气氛。

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Post time 2004-12-20 12:01:57 |Display all floors

这样改是不是更好一些??

Forty-three staff from the Beijing office had a small Xmas party on 16 December night in a French-style dinning bar in San Li Tun, the well known bar street in Beijing. It was a little bit snowy in the morning and made it more Christmassy.

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