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一篇有关公司圣诞晚会的报道,请好心人帮忙check,多谢!! [Copy link] 中文

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Beijing Office Xmas Party on 16 Dec Night

On 16 Dec. night Beijing office had a small Xmas party with attendance of 43 staff. The party was held in a French-style dinning bar in San Li Tun, the well known bar street in Beijing. It was a little bit snowy in the morning and made it more Christmas.

All the “VIPs” participated the party, like Michael Kwok, Lewis Shiu, Goman Ho, Alexis Lee, etc. Holly Shi, HR supervisor in her 2-day business trip in Beijing for 2005 graduates recruitment, was also present. Michael Kwok delivered a brief opening speech, summing up the works and achievements made by Beijing Office during the past.

There were lucky draws on the party and everybody got a small Xmas gift. Further more, two “Arup musicians”- Jin Xin (MEP) and Chas Pope (structural) made wonderful performance by playing violin and electrical guitar and push the party to the high tide.

Michael Kwok awarded the price of “Arup Musician” to them.
   
中文大意如下:
12月16日晚上北京办公室举行了一个小型圣诞晚会。晚会是在三里屯(北京著名酒吧街)的一个法式餐厅进行。
所有的“大人物”都参加了这个晚会。Michael Kwok在晚会开始之际发表了讲话,对一年来北京办公室的工作和成绩进行了总结和肯定。
在晚会上大家进行了抽奖,每个人都得到了一份小小的圣诞礼物。更有北京办公室的两位“音乐家”金欣和Chas分别进行了小提琴演奏和电子吉他演奏,将晚会的气氛推向了高潮。
Michael向两位音乐家颁发了“Special award”。
Holly Shi, Shanghai HR Supervisor,在北京进行面试,也参加了这个晚会。

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Post time 2004-12-20 09:07:22 |Display all floors

没人帮忙???自己顶!

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Post time 2004-12-20 10:09:19 |Display all floors

try

"It was a little bit snowy in the morning and made it more Christmas. "
使其更具圣诞气氛,make it more 后面是不是该用形容词?

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Post time 2004-12-20 10:15:11 |Display all floors

是的

Christmas,可不可以做形容词呢??

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THE ANSWER IS 不可以. Christmas is a proper noun but you can say Christmassy as

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Post time 2004-12-20 10:48:45 |Display all floors

then how to improve this sentience in a much better way?? just change the word??

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使其更具圣诞气氛 = the arriving snow has enhanced Christmas atmosphere or.....

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