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"Of those inspected, 1,651 have been shut down permanently, while the rest have been required to cease trading and make improvements to business practices," said He Guifu, director of the Social Security Department of the Guangdong Provincial Bureau of Public Security.

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改进/改善商业/业务惯例

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JFYR:被勒令停业整顿?

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3ks for your immediate reply!下面是原文,make improvements to business practices

Guangdong police close entertainment venues
By Zheng Caixiong (China Daily)
Updated: 2004-08-26 07:17



Hundreds of entertainment venues in Guangdong have been closed following a campaign to clamp down on prostitution, gambling and drugs.

As many as 10,670 entertainment businesses were inspected by law enforcement and government agencies during the three-month drive to flush out illegal activities in Guangdong Province.

"Of those inspected, 1,651 have been shut down permanently, while the rest have been required to cease trading and make improvements to business practices," said He Guifu, director of the Social Security Department of the Guangdong Provincial Bureau of Public Security.

The campaign was launched on May 10 and involved eight major cities Guangzhou, Shenzhen, Zhuhai, Dongguan, Huizhou, Foshan, Zhongshan and Jiangmen. All are situated in the prosperous Pearl River Delta which borders the Hong Kong and Macao special administrative regions.

He told a press conference over 24,000 were detained and hundreds of arrests were made. Among those detained were prostitutes and their clients many of whom hold Hong Kong and Macao resident permits, and some are senior gang members.

Zhuhai police arrested nine gang members and 13 prostitutes during a June raid. Key members of the gang were brothers and sisters from the same family. More than 100,000 yuan (US$12,000) was confiscated.

He said the special campaign has struck heavy blow to local prostitution and illegal gang-related activities

He urged local residents and tourists to the province to avoid visiting prostitutes.

Police will continue to crackdown, He said.

Government departments will forge closer ties to expand regular inspection of entertainment venues.

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Post time 2004-8-26 18:06:42 |Display all floors

您讲的是required to cease trading 被勒令停业整顿,我问的是make improvements to b

本文摘自今天的Chinadaily,如何才能翻译的象是大家经常听到的新闻译文呢?

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Post time 2004-8-26 18:11:54 |Display all floors

JFYR:

不知楼主是否觉得make improvments to buisness practices在“停业整顿”中多少有些体现?或者根本没有体现?期继续批评指教。

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Post time 2004-8-26 18:24:34 |Display all floors

谢谢,您说的有理!这应该就是停业整顿的英文了!

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