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【刀钝笔拙】2015年英语专业八级考试 汉译英 [Copy link] 中文

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          茶花(camellia)的自然花期在12月至翌年4月,以红色系为主,另有黄色系和白色系等,花色艳丽。本届花展充分展示了茶花的品种资源和科研水平,是近三年来本市规模最大的一届茶花展。为了使广大植物爱好者有更多与茶花亲密接触的机会,本届茶花展的布展范围延伸至整个园区,为赏花游客带来便利。
          此次茶花展历时2个月,展期内200多个茶花品种将陆续亮相。






          The natural blooming season of camellia is from December to next April, with the red flowers as the main category, plus other bright colors such as yellow and white. This year’s flower exhibition, the scale of which has been the largest in the past three years in the city, is a wide-open window on camellia varieties and scientific research levels. The exhibition area covers the whole park so as to afford tourists much convenience of enjoying flowers and plant fanciers more opportunities for close contact with camellias.
          During the two-month session, over 200 varieties of camellia will be successively put on display.




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广西南宁有个很出名的金花茶公园,每年举办茶花国际学术年会,笔者有幸在其间当过差,想必原文出于此吧?

茶花(camellia)的自然花期在12月至翌年4月,以红色系为主,另有黄色系和白色系等,花色艳丽。本届花展充分展示了茶花的品种资源和科研水平,是近三年来本市规模最大的一届茶花展。为了使广大植物爱好者有更多与茶花亲密接触的机会,本届茶花展的布展范围延伸至整个园区,为赏花游客带来便利。
          此次茶花展历时2个月,展期内200多个茶花品种将陆续亮相。

Camellias in nature  have a bloosming period which runs from December to April. The colors of camellia are bright, with red being the majority and yellow and white available. The current exhibition, the largest of its kind over the past three years in this city, fully displays the varieties of camellias and the relevant research achievements. In order to provide fans with more opportunitiesto have close contact with camellias, the exhibition space is extended to cover the total area of the park, bringing convenience to visitors.
The exhibition will last 2 months, during which some 200 types of camellias will be showcased.

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  The natural blooming season of camellia(此次与原文所表达有出入) is from December to next(这个词有点多余了) April, with the red flowers as the main category, plus other bright colors such as yellow and white(这里表达有点拖沓,不过应付考试应该冇问题). This year’s(原文没有说是本年度,只说本届,如果一年有两届,你这样说就不对了) flower exhibition, the scale of which has been the largest in the past three years in the city(这个表达不如楼下的), is a wide-open window (这里为何提及窗户,演绎有点过了)on camellia varieties and scientific research levels(这种说法比较中式). The exhibition area covers the whole park so as to afford (这个是出得起钱的意思,好象不对)tourists (这个是游客,难道本地人不能来吗?)much convenience of enjoying flowers and plant fanciers (这种说法有自造的嫌疑)more opportunities for close contact with camellias.
           During the two-month session, over 200 varieties of camellia will be successively put on display(本句还是太过于追求与原文的结构相同而生硬).

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This post was edited by SoftAngel at 2015-4-21 12:35

楼主在博客里说自己在监考英语八级统考时做翻译题,哈哈,是哪个大学的?这是严重的渎职哟!乃们学校过级率高不高呀?

When you are try seeking comments from others by posting your work, why have you been silent as if you hadn't seen our posts?
Can i understand you are just narcissistic?
姐姐是 不是有点自恋呀?

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谢谢楼上对译文的剖析与修改建议
也感谢对认真监考的提醒和对学校过级率的关心,应该说年年有升吧

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