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Post time 2004-4-12 11:50:58 |Display all floors
Dear all,
how to translate “对外承接福州至深圳的货物运输” and  “提成”
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Post time 2004-4-12 14:37:21 |Display all floors

FYI

对外承接福州至深圳的货物运输” and “提成”
we provide the sevice of goods traffic from Fuzhou to Shenzhen
percentage deducting from sales

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Post time 2004-4-12 15:03:07 |Display all floors

thank you

here is my translation

engage in business concerning freight transportation between Fuzhou Province and Shenzhen.

Dividend

is that okay?

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Post time 2004-4-12 15:10:58 |Display all floors

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engage in business concerning freight transportation between Fuzhou Province and Shenzhen.
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1福州是福建的省会不能用PROVINCE, 就算你说福建也不用PROVINCE,不简洁
2你的原文是从福州到深圳, 而不是福州和深训。
译文BETWEEN让人觉得是双程的,而不是单程的
3介词CONCERNING我觉得好象不是很恰当, OF/ABOUT
4 这是贷代我觉得它提供是一种服务,PROVIDE SEVICE也许比ENGAGE在此句中更合适
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5。BUSINESS 前要加定冠词THE, 它的后面有介词来限定,是特指。
-6Dividend 这个好象是分红的意思

你再看看别人的译文吧。

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Post time 2004-4-12 17:21:00 |Display all floors

thank you

十分感谢 :  )
希望以后能多多指教

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Post time 2004-4-12 17:31:44 |Display all floors

MY VERSION!

We serve goods delivery /transportation from Fuzhou to Shenzhen.

deduct a percentage from a sum of money.

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Post time 2004-4-12 17:36:04 |Display all floors

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