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Post time 2012-3-6 11:38:11 |Display all floors
各位兄弟姐妹,大家帮忙一句翻译

“我负责营运由产品经理所管理的几个品牌中的其中一个品牌”

I am responsible for operating a brand which is one of the few brands under the managment of product manager.

这是我的翻译,大家觉得怎样??

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Post time 2012-3-6 15:18:56 |Display all floors
I am responsible for operating one of several brands which are run by product managers.

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Post time 2012-3-6 18:40:43 |Display all floors
I am responsible for operating one of several brands run by my product manager.
Knowing what is enough is enough.

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Post time 2012-3-6 18:46:36 |Display all floors
我觉得你英语水平满高的,只是汉语水平需要推敲。

“我负责营运由产品经理所管理的几个品牌中的其中一个品牌”,句式太长了,改成“XX产品经营管理所管理几个品牌产品,我负责营运一个。”,这样无论是英语汉语,都传递信息方便一些。

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