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请大家帮我看看这段翻得对不对 [Copy link] 中文

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Post time 2012-2-2 18:07:20 |Display all floors

双方承认在履行本合同时,一方(提供方)可能根据本协议提供给另一方(接收方)的配方,技术规格,发票,系统,概念,设计,工艺流程和其他技术材料和商业信息属于提供方的知识产权。

Both parties admit that the prescriptions, technical specifications, invoices, systems, concepts, designs, workflow, techniques and other technical material and commercial information that one party (the providing party) may provide to the other party (receiving party)in accordance with this agreement during the performance of it from time to time are intellectual property in accordance with this agreement.

请大家帮我看看这段翻得对不对, 需要如何修改,谢谢大家!

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Post time 2012-2-3 04:54:40 |Display all floors

双方承认在履行本合同时,一方(提供方)可能根据本协议提供给另一方(接收方)的配方,技术规格,发票,系统,概念,设计,工艺流程和其他技术材料和商业信息属于提供方的知识产权。


Both parties admit【acknowledge 或 affirm】that the prescriptions【formulations】, technical specifications, invoices, systems, concepts, designs, workflow【processes】, techniques【何来?】and other technical material【“技术材料”是什么意思?如果材料是指资料之类,可把 material 删去】and commercial information that one party (the providing party) may provide to the other party (receiving party)


最后这部分有点乱,与原文不完全相符:

in accordance with this agreement during the performance of it from time to time【何来?】are intellectual property in accordance with this agreement.


原文一时说“本合同”,一时说“本协议”,不是很严谨。“发票”也算是知识产权,也有点奇怪。



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Post time 2012-2-3 19:37:45 |Display all floors
发票就是商品交易的一种普通文书,为何归在知识产权范围内?还真看不懂......

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Post time 2012-2-3 19:42:34 |Display all floors
发票就是证明商品交易的一种普通文书,从没见过将发票也纳入知识产权范畴的,老外看了会觉着很奇怪......

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Post time 2012-2-4 11:04:06 |Display all floors
其实LZ只要改动一下admit(agree), 整篇意思还是通顺的,workflow 、techniques和technical materials虽然用的不如process多,但也是正确的。

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Post time 2012-2-4 18:49:16 |Display all floors
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Post time 2012-2-4 18:53:36 |Display all floors
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