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expatter Post time: 2012-1-18 03:57
Wow ..........   !

You are doing a great job .........   

You have done well, too.  Let's work together to make this a good learning experience for everyone, and have some fun in the process!

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Post time 2012-1-18 22:25:32 |Display all floors
十几w? put it in 10 years ago yes, but now, i don't think they are going to make it even in the countryside, what about insurance?

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jl2315 Post time: 2012-1-18 21:58
You have done well, too.  Let's work together to make this a good learning experience for everyone ...

That's a 10 - 4 Good Buddy ..........      
What the world needs is more geniuses with humility, there are so few of us left  -   Oscar Levant

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This post was edited by jl2315 at 2012-1-18 21:45
#11 aaooq Post time: 2012-1-12 00:57
1. Man: Look! I have withdrawn all of our deposits of more than 100,000 yuan.
2. Man: Darling, Let's make a migration!
3. Man: Let's live a life like a landlord with cars and big houses.
    Woman: Is all this enough? [1]
4. Man: Come on, [2] Let's [3] move to the countryside!

[1] "all" should be taken out.

[2] "Come on" 不是恰当的转折。

[3] 太多 Let's。(逗号后的L不应大写)

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This post was edited by jl2315 at 2012-1-18 22:20
#15 R郭郭 Post time: 2012-1-12 21:37
1、MAN:  See! I have Several hundred thousand deposit and I got it.
2、MAN:Honey! We can emigrate .
3、MAN:  We can have the life what we have the car, the house, just like landholders.
    WOMAN: Is that enough?
4、MAN: Come on!  we can emigrate to village.


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This post was edited by jl2315 at 2012-1-18 22:36
#20 fragar Post time: 2012-1-13 20:40
1. Man: Check it out! I've withdrawn all our money from the bank! More than 100 grands~

2. Man: Sweetie~Let's make an emigration!
   
3. Man:  Let's lead a landlord's life with a gorgeous house and a nice car~
    Woman: With such little money?

4. Man: Come on~Let's head to the country~

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This post was edited by jl2315 at 2012-1-19 15:31
#24 erica_l Post time: 2012-1-14 22:20
1. Man: Hey, I've drawn out my saving account. That's tens of thousands! [1]
2. Man: Sweetheart, let's plan to immigrate. [2]
3. Man: We can lead a decent life with a cottage [3] and a car.  As comfortable as the landlords!
    Woman: Would that be enough?
4. Man: Let's go! To the country side!
[1] tens of thousands = 几十万

[2] He's stating what he wants to do, not what he plans to do; and it's emigrate, not immigrate.

[3] "decent" and "cottage" are somewhat too modest.

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