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Post time 2008-11-19 15:02:49 |Display all floors
after negotiated with a Hongkong company, they were persuaded to give up the stand , for which you need not pay any additional fees.

意思是通过我们与香港公司之间的协商,这家公司被说服放弃这个展位,对此不比付额外的费用。


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Post time 2008-11-19 16:34:40 |Display all floors

中英文均指代不清

  “这家公司”是指哪家公司?“香港公司”还是另外一家公司?

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Post time 2008-11-19 16:45:48 |Display all floors
no error

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Post time 2008-11-19 16:47:19 |Display all floors
It is always helpful to have a sentence or two around the subject in question. here are my guesses...


"after negotiating with a Hong Kong company, they were persuaded to change their position at no additional cost".

"after negotiating with a Hong Kong company, they were persuaded to change the contract at no additional cost".

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