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余光中《尺素寸心》(节选)译   [Copy link] 中文

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Post time 2012-1-19 17:01:48 |Display all floors
学习了,一个小建议供楼主参考 第一句的release,个人觉得relief好像更好一点,一点拙见勿怪

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Post time 2012-1-23 19:35:57 |Display all floors
elsaelsa Post time: 2012-1-19 17:01
学习了,一个小建议供楼主参考 第一句的release,个人觉得relief好像更好一点,一点拙见勿怪 ...

非常感谢你的建议
的确应该用relief,release不好
顺祝冬祺!

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Post time 2012-2-13 10:44:22 |Display all floors
Great job.

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Post time 2012-2-17 16:56:24 |Display all floors
evelyn_yu Post time: 2010-3-25 10:01
He's simply in the very mountain. In the depths of clouds, his whereabouts are unknown.
只在此山中, ...

只在此山中。。。为啥是He's simply in the very mountain...啥是Very mountain...? 求点拨。

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Post time 2012-2-17 16:57:06 |Display all floors
赶着去上班。。。就看了第一句,楼主不错噢!

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Post time 2012-2-18 13:11:11 |Display all floors
This post was edited by heroodle at 2012-2-18 13:11
sugar-free Post time: 2012-2-17 16:56
只在此山中。。。为啥是He's simply in the very mountain...啥是Very mountain...? 求点拨。 ...


adj.
正是的(相当于right,exact)
She is the very person I wanted to see.
她正是我要见的人。

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Post time 2012-2-23 13:29:11 |Display all floors
只能体会汉语的美感,对于译文不能品评。
或许是原文中大多是短句,译文也忠实了这一点,符合我们的思维习惯,使之读来特别顺畅。

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