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芮朴中盘激战(围棋英语试译) [Copy link] 中文

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Post time 2008-1-17 10:12:45 |Display all floors
芮乃伟执黑以星小目开局,布局阶段双方下的都非常谨慎,互围大模样。第15手,44岁的老将芮乃伟率先用肩冲打入白空,朴志恩白16一间高夹非常凶狠。黑棋在此不愿意与白棋作战,只是轻轻浅消把白棋大摸样打散。朴志恩凶狠的棋风此后再次体现,抓住黑棋棋形的弱点不放,最后双方在此形成转换,白棋把角上黑三子吃掉形成了50目左右的巨空。

试译:

Rui, the black side, started the game with the Star and Small-mu opening. The both sides were very cautious on the opening stage to contain large frameworks respectively. At the 15th move, however, the 44-year-old Rui rose in revolt and invaded the white’s space with a shoulder. The younger player Piao returned the veteran a severe one-space high pincer. Not willing to fight with the white here, the black used a light reducing move to break up the white’s large framework. Afterwards, Piao showed us her severe style thoroughly to grab at the black’s weakness in the shape. As result, both sides accepted a diversion and the white, captured three pieces in a corner, formed a large space of 50 Mu.

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Post time 2008-1-17 10:43:25 |Display all floors

well done

I couldn't do better. Is Cop working for some Go website or journal?

Unsure about a couple of points, however:
(1) 空 is 'territory' rather than 'space' in go's terminology. ?
(2) diversion = 转换?I'd think of 'conversion' or words in association with 'exchange', 'transfer'.

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Post time 2008-1-17 10:49:10 |Display all floors

谢谢以上二位的意见!

relentless 这个词更生动,我一直没想好用什么词。

用space表示“空”,我确实很不确定,大概不行?'territory' 肯定是对的。我后面用它表示“实地”,大概“空”也应该用这个词。不知道还有没有其它词?

转换,用 diversion 不好,用 exchange 显然更好些。

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Post time 2008-1-17 10:55:15 |Display all floors

You could google 'go" to have a list of go websites to browse..

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Post time 2008-1-17 10:57:14 |Display all floors
Good suggestion! Thanks, rovi. I will do that.
BTW, I love this game!

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