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Post time 2007-12-25 09:12:39 |Display all floors
原句:

该公司是一家集生产、商业和科研于一体的综合性企业。

本人试译:

The company is a comprehensive enterprise where the production, commerce and research are integrated into an organic whole.

一位老师对此句给予批评,认为 integrated into an organic whole 的表达太中式化了。请教各位译友,“集。。。于一体”应如何表达?

[ Last edited by copchen at 2007-12-25 09:14 AM ]

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Post time 2007-12-25 09:14:24 |Display all floors
单独integrate...with...就可以了。

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Post time 2007-12-25 09:22:20 |Display all floors

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Post time 2007-12-25 10:01:12 |Display all floors
my try:
该公司是一家集生产、商业和科研于一体的综合性企业。

It is a company that makes products, does business, and also does research.

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Post time 2007-12-25 10:32:15 |Display all floors
cop,看过E.B.White写的Here Is New York吗?

里面有一句话是这样的:New York is the concentrate of art and commerce and sport and religion and entertainment and finance, bringing to a single compact arena the gladiator, the evangelist, the promoter,  the actor,  the trader,  and the merchant.

所以,把这个句式借过来,你的就可以变成:This company is the concentrate of production, commerce and research.

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Post time 2007-12-25 10:51:58 |Display all floors
Hi:
I don't think "concentrate" is suitable.
"concentrate" means a liquid or substance from which water has been removed to make it stronger.

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Post time 2007-12-25 13:58:07 |Display all floors
The company is a comprehensive enterprise combining production, commerce and scientific research.

国人的套话太多了。
总结报告没有不“上了一个新台阶”的,企业简介没有不“集……为一体”的,不信你注意看看。

concentrate作动词意为“浓缩”,作名词就是“浓缩物”了。不太合适。

[ Last edited by keypoint at 2007-12-25 02:04 PM ]

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