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寂静的我独坐在寂静的夜 C-E [Copy link] 中文

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Post time 2007-4-4 16:53:41 |Display all floors
寂静的我独坐在寂静的夜,那些生活的影子便不期而至,眼窝里就会涌出泪水,提笔则更是泪流不止,毫无办法,已成疾。

-------摘录自《往事并不如烟》作者自序

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[ Last edited by copchen at 2007-4-4 08:51 PM ]

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Post time 2007-4-4 20:44:10 |Display all floors

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Sitting silently in silent nights, shadows of the past life were coming to my mind unexpectedly. Tears rolled down from my eyes, and it's even worse when I took up my pen. Having no way to escape, I fell ill.


以上翻译第一句有语病,经楼下朋友rovi和waxman 指正,试改为如下:

In silent nights I sat silently, and shadows of the past life came to my mind unexpectedly. .......

[ Last edited by copchen at 2007-4-5 05:18 PM ]

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Post time 2007-4-4 20:52:29 |Display all floors

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As a quiet man, I would like to spend a quiet night sitting alone, while  flashbacks of life will come to me without warning.
Tears in swollen eyes will fall down and begin to pour down if I try to write something. I couldn't do anything about it. It is like an illness.

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Post time 2007-4-4 23:34:30 |Display all floors
寂静的我独坐在寂静的夜,那些生活的影子便不期而至,眼窝里就会涌出泪水,提笔则更是泪流不止,毫无办法,已成疾。
Sitting alone in the night that was just as quiet as me,  until those pictures of the past came to me without a notice, tear would well up in the eyes, and even overflow when I hold up the pen. Beyond any remedies,  I saw it become a disease.

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Post time 2007-4-4 23:35:52 |Display all floors
Sitting alone in the night that was just as quiet as me,  until those pictures of the past came to me without a notice, tear would well up in the eyes, and even overflow when I hold up the pen. Beyond any remedies,  I saw it become a disease.

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Post time 2007-4-4 23:49:01 |Display all floors
楼主英语相当好,我刚学,以后多多指教,看了你的翻译,文才很好!

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