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Post time 2007-2-6 23:21:39 |Display all floors
Originally posted by eva_21 at 2007-2-2 15:56
Today two colleagues in finance department wrangled, because accountant said the cashier made something wrong and told her to change all, but the cashier thought she was faultfinding.
They squabbl ...


Here the sentence 'I saw the conflict in the office for the first time' could be re-written as 'This is the first time that I witnessed an office brawl'? I am wondering...though it could be better...
Well done, Eva!

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Post time 2007-2-7 08:53:40 |Display all floors

Thanks for your correction.

Originally posted by celine713 at 2007-2-6 23:21


Here the sentence 'I saw the conflict in the office for the first time' could be re-written as 'This is the first time that I witnessed an office brawl'? I am wondering...though it could be bet ...



There are so many kind person here.
I feel warm.

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Post time 2007-2-7 14:16:30 |Display all floors

2007-02-07 sunny & also hot

There was a klatch with my classmates in senior high school last Sunday.
I didn’t want to join it because I am always out of tune.
They planed singing in KTV, and then had chaffy dish.
So my friend, Wei Wang, called me to have dinner.
I was regretted to dine because we were late and had to sit on the different table.
Although we were ever classmates, we had been strange by more than four-year separation.
I won’t join such party which they sing in KTV and have chafing dish in the same place every time.
I would like to travel far and near.
And I met a singular matter on my way to the restaurant that day.
I felt there was a thief nearby when I was in the crowed bus.
I put my hand on the bag after buying the ticket.
But it walloped badly, I had to catch the doorpost.
I stood up in the front of the door.
Then I found the man put his handbag upon mine.
I doubted he was a thief.
So I squeezed my way in and stood beside the ticket seller.
I fount my satchel had been opened a little.
And luckily, everything was secure.
There were two persons getting off, and a boy student shouted that he lost his handset as soon as the door was closed.
He had been listening by earphone before the handset was stolen.
I thought the thief was the second man because he left the bus hurriedly and the boy listened last second.
When the man who was a thief I ever doubted dialed the number of the boy’s combined set, the thief answered and hung up it quickly.
The thief was so arrogant.
My first handset was stolen on my way home during SARS.
I felt so happy originally that day when I was allowed to go home since two weeks. (I feel it has something wrong about expression.)
Why there are so many evildoers in the world?
Well, there was another thing making me dispirited.
A pupil called me auntie when I was buying the ticket of railway.
I feel I am old.
I was sister before and my nephews and nieces were little enough.
There will be pupils, senior high school students and university students calling me auntie.
It’s the bad feeling.

to be continued...

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Post time 2007-2-7 18:54:27 |Display all floors
Originally posted by eva_21 at 2007-2-7 14:16
There was a klatch with my classmates in senior high school last Sunday.
I didn’t want to join it because I am always out of tune.
They planed singing in KTV, and then had chaffy dish.
So my fr ...

good job! it is easy to say write english diary, but it is very difficult to do it, and you can keep it go on, it is very hard-won! keep on going! I believe you will make great progress on english writing.

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Post time 2007-2-8 08:43:06 |Display all floors

Thanks for your encouragement, vagrantboy

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Post time 2007-2-8 15:03:15 |Display all floors

2007-02-08 overcast & rainy

These days were so hot just like in summer.
I am so afraid of cold winter that I take on woollen trousers and more than two sweaters than others in my age of student.
It is so humiliatory that my father said me like a granny.
But I haven’t felt cold this winter, and taken on two thin sweaters at most, or added the woolen pants before dawn every Monday when I always went out early.
Perhaps it is warmer in Shanghai and there are air-conditions in company being different from in school where we had to sit down all of the schooltime.
Probably I can put on the skirt next winter.
I missed to do exercises, especially mathematics, a few days ago.
I don’t cherish the memory of the times of student.
I only yearn the feeling of finishing the assignment.
I am desirous to review that there is a new mathematic exercise-book on the desk and I overcome the difficult problems under the sunshine in winter.
I should emphasize that the situation was happened in senior high school.
I didn’t get the stress from my parents those days.
But I think the stress was existed from self in the cockles of my heart.
I began to retrogress in middle school as soon as I felt pressure not only from school, but also from self.
I expected to grow up when I was a little girl.
But I don’t know what to expect now.
Maybe the love...

to be continued...

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Post time 2007-2-9 15:59:19 |Display all floors

2007-02-09 overcast & rainy

It is cool today.
I contacted with my roommate of university on MSN.
We recollected the life of the college suddenly during chatting with each other.
The commodious school gate is still open wide
The palms like pineapple stand up as janitors
The library we always read in is the best beautiful
The eatery being crowed at lunch time is filled of our silhouettes
The road we ran along every morning become shorter
The bedchamber being titled neat & civilized one are occupied by others now
The cyprinoids with supernutrition are also well-fed
The pigeons we ever fed fly in the sky
……
Etc.
That is the leisure time as if there is no worry, and it is hard to review.
Why do I remember the foretime these days?

To be continued…

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