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Post time 2006-12-14 22:22:51 |Display all floors
Originally posted by jeff_in_sf at 2006-12-14 12:22
Oh, I thought that might be the case.

"Wrinkles" fits the picture but a heart "wrinkling" is, well, a bit unusual.

Still, in poetry (or literature, generally), one can alw ...

Thank you for the correction.

[ Last edited by whirlingone at 2006-12-15 09:36 PM ]
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Post time 2006-12-18 03:21:03 |Display all floors

MOONLIGHT needs a person's patience and braveness

This moonlight poem really remember anyone who is enjoying the perfection-chaser.

Touched and shocked by the this moonlight, it reflects some reality which happpens in your daily life

this is on one hand, it also appears a sense in my mind ; on the other hand, it can warn us the time and

reality, we run here and here with so called one-stone-two-bird assitude, hoping to find and gain something

but in the end, we have to wait for the next. Anyhow, something, can not happen again in our life.

As for the style, i like it very much, using the simplest word, but can interprete some truth.

Thanks for your effort and wisdom,

We are looking forward to more nice poem will appear here again.

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