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公司愿景,请帮忙修正译文,如容如下 [Copy link] 中文

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Post time 2006-7-11 13:13:21 |Display all floors
引进及发展前瞻材料、设备与技术,提供高加值服务,以造福员工、客户及股东。

原译:Develop and introduce advanced material,equipment ,and technology,as well as provide high value-added service,to create growth to employees,customers ,and stockholders.

Please help me correct it, thanks.

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Post time 2006-7-11 14:04:16 |Display all floors
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create growth to ---->benefit

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Post time 2006-7-11 14:11:04 |Display all floors
原文没有主语(中文经常这样用),以在下之愚见,英文应该将主语加上。
试译如下:
By means of introducing and developing advanced materials, equipment and technologies, the company will provide high added value services to benefit its employees, customers and stockholders.

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Post time 2006-7-11 15:09:58 |Display all floors
引进及发展前瞻材料、设备与技术,提供高加值服务,以造福员工、客户及股东。
By introducing and focusing on the development of advanced materials, equipments and technology,  we provide high value-added services, so as to improve the welfare of employees , and benifit our customers and shareholders.

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Post time 2006-7-11 15:14:55 |Display all floors

Thanks

thank tq0bv and copchen.         
另 to copchen:  大都类似应用在工厂及说明书上,通常不用主语也能明确意思或是让他人明白.

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Post time 2006-7-11 15:16:51 |Display all floors

thanks all

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