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Chapter 19     Engineering Industry机械工业

“Tenth Five Year Plan Period” represents one of the most favorable development periods for China’s engineering industry. Through several years’ rapid development, China’s engineering industry developed by leaps and bounds and attained a new height. The whole industry complied with most of the requirements as set forth in the overall objectives of the “10th Five-Year Program” in advance in 2004. The industrial scale was rapidly expanded; economic effects were continuously enhanced, the output value of new products increased on a continuous way; product structure was further upgraded; the total import and export volume gained an ever-increasing growth and the trade deficit was sharply minimized. During the “10th Five-Year Plan Period”, the fast growth of China’s engineering industry benefited mainly from the surging demands fueled by the state macroeconomic policies, yet it still followed the extensive growth mode. Because of the insufficient technological capability, China’s engineering industry are still faced with the structural problems that have long existed and blockage its smooth development, such as, its product structure with medium and small-grade products as the core, lower economic effects, lack of international competitive force, lack of the mutual cooperation and coordination between enterprises in socialized coordinating relationship(社会化配套协调关系), all of which were not fundamentally solved yet, and with the further expansion of China’s reform and opening up and the deepening of its participation of the international division of labor, China’s engineering industry will face the danger of being locked in and hard pressed by the low-end industrial chain. So upgrading the independent innovation capability and technological integration capability (技术集成能力)  is the only approach for China’s engineering industry to transform its growth mode. It is imperative to make breakthrough in the respect of crucially common and key technology; emphasis shall be placed on the development of crucially important technological equipment, thus promoting the enhancement of the overall independent innovation capability; promoting the formation of the cornerstone enterprises in the industry as the carrier of the independent innovation of the engineering industry. Therefore, the government, intermediary agencies and enterprises shall pool their efforts to bring their respective potential into full play, thus placing the government’s roles and functions in promoting the development of the engineering industry in place (职能归位); Efforts shall be made to tap the multi-level functions and roles of the intermediary agency organization in formulating the industry’s long-range plans, organizing and coordinating service and improving the industry’s technological standards, etc., setting up and amplifying the corporate mechanism conducive to the technological innovation.

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Tenth Five Year Plan Period”



老师说过, 序数词前要加THE
FIVE YEAR 做形容词, 要加连词号

The Tenth Five-Year Plan Period

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Through several years’ rapid development, China’s engineering industry developed by leaps and bounds and attained a new height.



rapid development , developed by leaps ...


有两个同源词汇,句子看上去呆板.

改:

RAPID GROWTH

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“10th Five-Year Program”



好象数字不能用于第一个词组?


The Tenth Five-Year...

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Through several years’ rapid development, China’s engineering industry developed by leaps and bounds

If something happens by leaps and bounds, it means means it happens very quickly,
so either "the rapid development" or "by leaps and bounds" is redundant.



economic efficiency经济效益not economic effects

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理解=>表达=》润色
understanding+expressing+polishing

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太长了;
主要不足的地方是时态句子结构的处理;
下面指出的只是一部分,其他的人会给你更好的意见:

“Tenth Five Year Plan Period” represents one of the most favorable development periods for China’s engineering industry. Through several years’ rapid development, China’s engineering industry developed by leaps and bounds and attained a new height. The whole industry complied with most of the requirements as set forth in the overall objectives of the “10th Five-Year Program” in advance in 2004. The industrial scale was rapidly expanded; economic effects were continuously enhanced, the output value of new products increased on a continuous way; product structure was further upgraded; the total import and export volume gained an ever-increasing growth and the trade deficit was sharply minimized. During the “10th Five-Year Plan Period”, the fast growth of China’s engineering industry benefited mainly from the surging demands fueled by the state macroeconomic policies, yet it still followed the extensive growth mode. Because of the insufficient technological capability, China’s engineering industry are still faced with the structural problems that have long existed and blockage its smooth development, such as, its product structure with medium and small-grade products as the core, lower economic effects, lack of international competitive force, lack of the mutual cooperation and coordination between enterprises in socialized coordinating relationship(社会化配套协调关系), all of which were not fundamentally solved yet, and with the further expansion of China’s reform and opening up and the deepening of its participation of the international division of labor, China’s engineering industry will face the danger of being locked in and hard pressed by the low-end industrial chain. So upgrading the independent innovation capability and technological integration capability (技术集成能力)  is the only approach for China’s engineering industry to transform its growth mode. It is imperative to make breakthrough in the respect of crucially common and key technology; emphasis shall be placed on the development of crucially important technological equipment, thus promoting the enhancement of the overall independent innovation capability; promoting the formation of the cornerstone enterprises in the industry as the carrier of the independent innovation of the engineering industry. Therefore, the government, intermediary agencies and enterprises shall pool their efforts to bring their respective potential into full play, thus placing the government’s roles and functions in promoting the development of the engineering industry in place (职能归位); Efforts shall be made to tap the multi-level functions and roles of the intermediary agency organization in formulating the industry’s long-range plans, organizing and coordinating service and improving the industry’s technological standards, etc., setting up and amplifying the corporate mechanism conducive to the technological innovation.

[ Last edited by ofriendragon at 2006-5-26 11:37 PM ]
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