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Post time 2006-5-11 09:27:05 |Display all floors
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     我们是一家以经营新旧汽车零配件出口为主的贸易部,尤以旧汽车零部件的经营为主。下面给你介绍一条来自于中国新信息:早年从日本进口到中国的各种型号的汽车,根据中国目前的相关法律,其使用期限已过,必须要实行强制的报废并拆解。数量约为每年数十万台之多。由于日本汽车在品质上原有的优良,因而在拆解下来的零部件当中,相当一部分是还具有回收利用价值的。近年来一些国外该行业的客户注视到了中国这个新的市场信息,先后进入了中国进行采购。而我们经过了多年来代为客户收集其所需部件,积累了丰富的采购经验。而后成为了各客户在中国的采购代理商。我们为能与更多国家的客户认识并成为贸易合作伙伴,特发来此邮件予你。希望这信息对你或你在这行业的朋友有参考价值,并是一个商机。你如需要更多的资料,请联络我们,愿你从得到此信息开始,成为我们的朋友,更希望能成为生意合作伙伴。另有相关图片已发到你的附件箱,你打开看会更明嘹。哥伦布发现了美洲新大陆,美洲从始而繁荣,愿你发现了中国市场这一新信息,生意从始更兴旺。诚盼你的回音。谢谢!
Our trading department is mainly engaged in the export of new and second-hand auto spare parts and accessories, particularly the second hand auto spare parts and accessories. Down below is a piece of the latest news from China: a wide range of cars imported from Japan to China in previous years have passed the terms of service and the mandatory measures shall be taken to write off them for dismantle. The annual quantity of these kinds of cars approximates to 10 thousand or a little more. As Japanese cars are originally superior in quality, quite a large number of the dismantled spare parts and accessories are still worthy of being reclaimed for reuse. In recent years some foreign clients in the auto manufacturing industry pay close attention to the latest information in the Chinese market and successively purchase these spare parts and accessories in China. Over years we have been collecting the second hand auto spare parts and accessories on behalf of our clients, thus having accumulated rich purchasing experience. Later on we establish agency relationships with our clients as purchasing agent accordingly. We hereby send this email to you in the hope of getting to know more clients in more countries and regions and establish trading cooperation with you. It is highly hoped that the information we offer herein will be of any reference value to you or your friends in the industry or a commercial opportunity for you. If you need more materials or data in this respect, please contact us. It is our sincere hope that we can make good friends at the very moment you get this information and that we can join hands to push forward our business cooperation as partners. Additionally, some relevant pictures have already been sent to your email box, which will help you to form a better understanding. Columbia discovered the new American continent, thus America began to prosper. Hopefully you can discover the new information in the Chinese market, and your business will be more prosperous.
Look forward to your reply and wish you the best!
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Post time 2006-5-11 09:30:43 |Display all floors
零部件component part?
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Post time 2006-5-11 09:33:45 |Display all floors
below is a piece of the latest news from China:
The following is the latest news from China
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Post time 2006-5-11 09:40:25 |Display all floors
Columbia 哥伦比亚

应该是:
Christopher Columbus
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Post time 2006-5-11 09:41:18 |Display all floors
The "New" Continent.
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Post time 2006-5-11 09:42:30 |Display all floors
新旧汽车 new and used cars?
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Post time 2006-5-11 09:46:29 |Display all floors
数十万台several tens of thousands
不是几万10 thousand or a little more.

"之多:"可以说“as much as several tens of thousands"?

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