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Post time 2006-2-21 11:15:51 |Display all floors
原文如下,相关的公司名字用YYY代替.不好意思!
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集团简介
步入2006年,YYY公司根据集团“人尽其才、物尽其用”的发展战略,特成立OEM/ODM事业部。以专业、专注为代工理念;以做你所想、超出预想为代工服务;以技术领先、质量保证为定位;以价格合理为长期合作基础。围绕公司化妆品、健康饮品、保健品、等商品按低成本、高品质进行委托制造,充分发挥时代公司的生产优势。
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第一种翻译版本:

Group Company Profile
With the concept of making good use of both talents and facilities, OEM/ODM division is set up in 2006. Guided by the motto of profession and devotion, take “ manufacture what you need, beyond your expectations” as manufacture service minds, and positioned by advanced technology and best quality, with reasonable long-term cooperation price, we offer you best OEM/ODM services of cosmetics, healthy beverage, health care products.

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第2种翻译版本

Group Company Profile
With the concept of making good use of both talents and facilities, OEM/ODM division is set up in 2006. Guided by profession and devotion, led by advanced technology, guaranteed by best quality and based on reasonable long-term cooperation price, we offer you your expected and better than your expected OEM/ODM services of cosmetics, healthy beverage, healthy products.


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具体要求如下:
1  请大家评论. 欢迎给出主观\客观意见.
2 如果有空的话可以提供你们的翻译版本.
3 主要目的: 交流,学习

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Post time 2006-2-22 08:42:50 |Display all floors
顶一下, 大家帮忙看一看. 第2种版本是偶翻译的, 第一种版本是我们哪个所谓的领导的修改~~~

请大家鉴定一下.....

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