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广告语的翻译:站在客户的角度,超越客户的期待! [Copy link] 中文

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Post time 2006-2-17 17:25:59 |Display all floors
这是一家塑料行业的slogan:

在不懈的追求与创新中,XX(公司)对成功的理解是:
     站在客户的角度,超越客户的期待!

In unremitting pursuit and innovation, XXX understands success as providing value-added service
exceeding what customers have expected.

我的版本又臭又长,有没有简短的类似精典英文表达呢?
谢谢先!

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Post time 2006-2-17 17:33:03 |Display all floors
站在客户的角度,超越客户的期待!
Start from a customer's perspective to exceed their expectations.
理解=>表达=》润色
understanding+expressing+polishing

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Post time 2006-2-17 17:43:47 |Display all floors

Customer-oriented and beyond your expectations.

Time Will Tell.

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Post time 2006-2-17 17:47:46 |Display all floors
Originally posted by hiy2004 at 2006-2-17 17:33
站在客户的角度,超越客户的期待!
Start from a customer's perspective to exceed their expectations.


后半句very good

Everything is for customers satisfaction, and always exceed their expectations.

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Post time 2006-2-17 17:48:55 |Display all floors
谢谢,可是如果要把这句话融入整个句子中呢?

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Post time 2006-2-17 17:53:09 |Display all floors

define success as:

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Post time 2006-2-17 17:56:10 |Display all floors
combining the above versions, my second version:

Everything we do does good to customers and always exceeds their expections.

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