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Post time 2005-11-10 10:57:33 |Display all floors
1. 在决定谁与谁竞争时,地域因素往往扮演着关键的角色.

  who competed with whom in determing,the geography has always play a key role  .


2.逐渐地,公司的价值将不是体现在有开资产,而是体现在无形资产:人员\思想以及重要信息驱动财产的战略整合.
  
   gradually,the value for a company is to be found not in its tangible assets,but in intangibles:people,ideas,and the strategic aggregation of key information-driven assets.

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Post time 2005-11-11 02:25:31 |Display all floors

Using machine translation ... plus my sensitive poetic soul {smile} ... I would

1. 在决定谁与谁竞争时,地域因素往往扮演着关键的角色.

When deciding who competes with whom, geography is often the key factor.

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But remember, I don't know Chinese. {smile}
BOKE

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Post time 2005-11-11 11:25:45 |Display all floors

hehe

thank you very much.


only you would like correct it to me. i think your translation will be better.because it is  more  smooth.

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Post time 2005-11-11 19:30:25 |Display all floors

pivotal role

Just an alternative,

1. 在决定谁与谁竞争时,地域因素往往扮演着关键的角色.
Geography often plays a pivotal role in deciding who competes against whom.
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2.逐渐地,公司的价值将不是体现在有开资产,而是体现在无形资产:人员\思想以及重要信息驱动财产的战略整合.

Excellent: 重要信息驱动财产的战略整合=the strategic aggregation of key information-driven assets.

I couldn't think of a better one.

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Post time 2005-11-12 22:56:36 |Display all floors

to: pivotal role

thank you very much.i am embarrassed because this one is the teacher

though we could not translate it , it is he  translated it for us.hehe

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