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China's first / earn

国内第一台立体停车设备
a stacker parking system which, at that time was China's first, and …… (China's first == more emphatic )
revised to:  a stacker parking system which then, was China's first, and ...

Haier”产品是以世界领先的技术、优良的品质推向市场,打造“Haier”形象。Haier始终以精品和服务取信于顾客。
“HAIER” products pride themselves on the cutting-edge technology and superior quality to brand the "HAIER" image. We earn the trust of customers by our quality products and services. (earn =  more convincing and achievement oriented than "committed". Besides, 'committed to winning' is not as good as 'committed to win'.)

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仅仅是外行的猜测,参考而已

还建成了北京“北苑六区”1155个车位项目,是单项工程数量最大项目。
We have also built the “1155 parking lot” project for “Beiyuan No. 6” in Beijing, which has the largest number of parking lots in a single project.
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北京“北苑六区”1155个车位项目:是不是位于“北苑六区”的1155个泊车位?
if so, your version might go like this:

We have also completed the project of '1155 parking lots' located in “Beiyuan No. 6 Area”in Beijing.

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