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2005赛季夏秋季联赛第二期(9月29日)公告 [Copy link] 中文

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Post time 2005-9-29 09:07:58 |Display all floors
各位朋友:

“四季翻译擂台赛”秋季联赛第二期比赛结束了。本期<font color="#FF6600">geoffhan </font>获得了一等奖,还有三名选手获得了二等奖,五名选手获得了优胜奖。

国庆节期间(9月30日至10月10日)擂台赛暂停,<font color="#FF6600">秋季联赛第三期比赛将从2005年10月11日开始到10月25日结束</font>,欢迎大家继续投稿。

另外,我们将在国庆节前(9月29日或30日)邮寄奖品,请获奖的朋友们注意查收。谢谢!

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Post time 2005-9-29 10:10:18 |Display all floors

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我连续投稿两次都没有结果,到底哪里出问题了?当时投稿真的是成功了啊!希望哪位指导一下,谢谢,要再这样真的不想投了,因为连分数都没有啊!郁闷ing!

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Post time 2005-9-29 15:13:29 |Display all floors

aha

me too,but in dream,hehe

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Post time 2005-9-30 13:44:55 |Display all floors

恭喜Geoffhan, 我觉得获奖译文比参考译文好得多

获奖译文虽有些小毛病,但没有什么硬伤。相比之下。。。

黄金周后再来讨论。

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Post time 2005-9-30 15:04:22 |Display all floors

疑问

参考译文中,把“宁停三分,不抢一秒”意译为“rather be late than never”。

我实在看不出来这两句话有什么关系。"rather late than never" 不是“迟做总比不做好”的意思吗?

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Post time 2005-9-30 20:40:36 |Display all floors

我的译文

疲劳超速酒后驾驶 谨防行车三大隐患

酒后驾车是导致车祸发生的罪魁祸首之一。因酒后驾车酿成的交通事故,其中有许多造成人亡车毁,有的甚至群死群伤。这正是:“司机一滴酒,亲人两行泪”。酒后车祸的悲剧在人生舞台上一次次重演,而依旧有人铤而走险, 致使酒后车祸的悲剧有增无减。应该加大执法和惩罚的力度, 在事故多发点要加强巡逻。

俗语说:“十次事故九次快”,所以要“宁停三分,不抢一秒。”心急地赶时间、争强好胜、寻找刺激是产生超速行驶的心理特征。超速行驶不仅会使避免撞车更加困难,而且会使撞车的可能性和严重性增大。车速越高,方向的操纵性越差,一旦遇到紧急情况,很难控制车辆的速度和方向。要更广泛地应用高科技手段如电子眼来捕捉超速驾驶者。

睡眠不足是造成疲劳驾驶的主要因素。如果驾驶员一天驾驶超过10小时以上,而睡眠不足4.5小时,则事故率最高,睡眠不足导致驾驶过程中不断打哈欠、频繁揉眼睛、手脚不灵活等。因此,充足的睡眠对驾驶来说是十分重要的。闷热的天气极易导致驾驶疲劳,统计发现,疲劳驾驶和酒后驾驶导致的交通肇事已超过超载、超速等,成为“马路新杀手”。

此外,还有很多其他不遵守交通法规的现象,比如打手机,无证驾驶、闯红灯、尾随、在车流中穿行甚至逆行的现象也时有发生。许多司机在车里挂满了各种装饰物,这也会影响注意力的集中,成为一种潜在的危险。新技术给汽车带来的安全措施往往会被驾驶员的不良行为所抵消,所以,通过加强宣传教育提高驾驶人员的素质便成为关键的问题。

Wine, weariness & Overspeed----Three Enemies Of Driving

  As one of the chief-culprits of traffic accidents, drunk driving frequently leads to wrecks and ruins, sometimes even groups of death and injury. This proves that: The drivers winedrops can reduce his family to tearfloods. Such tragedies have been performed once more and more on the life stage, however, some people still dare to run the risk recklessly, making tragedies ever-increasing. The law enforcement as well as punishment should be more severe. Patrol should frequent the spots that accidents haunt.

  As the saying goes: Nine out of ten accidents arise from overspeed, we would  stop for three minutes rather than rush for one second. Hurrying for time, eagerness for winnership as well as stimulus prove to be the psychological features of overspeed driving. Not only will it make crashes more difficult to avoid but also make it more possible to happen and more serious to suffer. The higher the speed, the harder the steering. The speed and direction will be easily out of control when emergency comes. High-tech such as electric eyes should be widely applied to catch the overspeed driver.

  To drive without enough sleep mainly causes the weariness when driving. If the driver drives more than 10 hours and sleeps less than 4.5 hours a day, accidents are the most likely to happen. Not enough sleep will lead to continual yawns, rubbing eyes as well as inflexible limbs. Thus, enough sleep is very important for drivers. In line with statistics, traffic accidents caused by drunk and weary driving which is ‘ the new killer on the road’ has been more than those caused by overload and overspeed.

In addition, mobile phone calls, unlicensedness, overrushing of red lights and followings also join to go against the traffic rules. Crossings even goings against the traffic also come up from time to time. Sundry ornaments in vehicles almost accustom to play with the driver’s attention as a mutant lurking danger. Safety measures brought by high-tech to the vehicles always victimized by the drivers’ misbehaviors. So critical it becomes to improve the drivers’ qualities by strengthening the propaganda of education.

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参考译文问题多多!

这样的译文如真是出自专家之手,专家门都歇菜吧。请看以下点评(译文还有其它细节和深层次问题,大家各抒己见吧):
Drunk-driving, Drowsy-driving and Speeding
Drink and drive is one of the leading causes of traffic fatalities 【注意原文是指车祸traffic accident,而不是车祸死亡人数fatalities】. Many of the traffic accidents related to 【attributable to更贴切】alcohol have caused 【claimed】severe deaths and damage, sometimes the road toll figure in each case is in a fairly large number.【两个分句之间是什么关系?连接词?be in a large number是规范英文?】 Just as they say【Chinglish】: “When a man mixes drink with drive, he is likely to bring tears to his wife.”Although such tragedies caused by drunken driving have happened time and again, unfortunately some people are still heedless of the danger.The accident fatalities caused by drunk driving have not abated【有增?】. Therefore, it is necessary to devote more resources to 【应跟名词】enhance the enforcement and to impose heavier fines and punishment. More police officers 【police 即可矣】must be put on patrol at the traffic “black spots”.

People say: “Of all the traffic accidents that have occurred nine out of ten 【nine out of ten of all ...? 语法错误。Nine out of ten traffic accidents result from speeding即可】is due to driving too fast.”So it is wise to follow the rule of thumb:“Rather be late than never”【“晚做总比永远不做好”?意思完全错误】. Worrying about time, trying to show off, and seeking stimulus 【stimulus是何物? 莫非司机想做巴浦洛夫的刺激-反应实验?】are all psychological factors contributing to driving in excessive speed【语法错误:at excessive speed】. Speeding reduces the time a driver has to avoid a collision and increases the likelihood and severity of the crash. The higher the speed is, the less flexible the wheel will be. Once there is an emergency【“In an emergency”is obviously better 】, it is very difficult to maneuver. It is suggested that technological advances, such as video cameras (also known as "photo radar"), should be used more widely to target and trap 【设圈套诱捕?】aggressive, speeding drivers.

Insufficient sleep is a major cause for drowsy driving. If a driver who has slept less than 4.5 hours keeps driving for 10 hours, he is in for the highest accident probability【be in for …probability值得商榷, 建议用stand the highest chance of an accident】. Lack of sleep will make him keep yawning, rub his eyes repeatedly, and reduce the dexterity of his limbs. Therefore, sufficient sleep is very important for drivers. Sultry weather condition is highly apt to make drivers feel tired/suffer from fatigue. Statistics show that drowsy driving and drunken driving far outweigh【用法错误:outweigh意思是“比…重要”、“胜过”、“强过”;该用“outnumber”,同时要加词】, overloading and speeding, thus becoming new killers on the road.

In addition, there are many other phenomena against 【Chinglish !】traffic law and regulations, such as using cell phones behind the wheel, driving without a license, running red lights/breaking red traffic lights, tailgating, drifting from or jerking back into lanes, and driving against the traffic flow – all of these are quite common occurrences nowadays. And many drivers have a lot of in-car tech toys which can distract the driver from the road. This is also a hidden danger. Since every 【”any” is better】 safety advantage conferred by technology【made possible by new technology】 can be eroded by a driver’s irrational behavior, the key issue is thus to enhance publicity and education through outreach activities to improve drivers’personal qualities.

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