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大才女! sophiaren, 偶佩服得五体投地, 还得请大侠们帮忙 [Copy link] 中文

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Post time 2005-8-5 12:31:58 |Display all floors
The paths to the house i seek to make
But leave to those to come the house itself
Believe I sing and preparation
As life and nature are not great with reference to the present only
But greater sill from what is yet to come
out of that formula from thee i sing

叩谢!

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Post time 2005-8-5 13:14:57 |Display all floors

try ( the last one here in CD)

先声明,我真是愧不敢当!! 能跟大家一起学习,我很高兴

actually it ia a really meaningful poem, it must be from a great thinker, i would greatly appreciated if you can tell me who he is.

勉强凑了下面两首, 请高手指点!!!! 见笑了~

其一:

想方设法,我开辟了通往房屋的路
毫无疑问,只留给不引自来的后来人
怀着一颗虔诚的心
准备好了去打拼
因为我懂得一个道理
生命与自然的伟大不只在眼前
更在不久的未来世界


其二:

设法通途路
且留后人走
一颗赤诚心
催我去打拼

看今朝物华天宝
待明日万象更新
是以吾此吟为赠
为尔能明其中因

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Post time 2005-8-5 13:51:38 |Display all floors

“其二”形神具备,PERFECT!

Thank you very much for so graceful translation!

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Post time 2005-8-5 17:28:41 |Display all floors

Walt Whitman - Leaves of Grass-One Song, America, Before I Go

惠特曼的草叶集之一

作为无韵自由诗翻译

我更喜欢其一的风格

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Post time 2005-8-5 17:40:02 |Display all floors

to sophiaren

You have a lot of promise,I have to say,

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Post time 2005-8-9 23:49:52 |Display all floors

sorry for my late thankness,

Thank you very much for your help

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